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Spaiku.

Apr 16, 2008 19:38

I was hoping for a visit from the funny Spaiku fairy, but apparently all the downers I've been taking for my back wanted me to write these instead. Oh well. Here's handful of haiku from BtVS S7 episodes "Never Leave Me," "Bring on the Night," and "Showtime."
Pairing: Spike/Buffy.
Rating: PG.

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Loud purring selinde2 April 17 2008, 03:35:35 UTC

I have got to work out how to add sound. Anyway, hope this conveys my contentment. The Paris one cracked me up, in an angsty way. Terrific. Hope your back gets better soon. Are you seeing all the help you need? Physio? Masseur? Yoga guru? Pilates? Chiropractor? Acupuncturist? You are much too nice to suffer. We need to send your pain to Glory, where it belongs....

Re: Loud purring mere_ubu April 17 2008, 03:45:24 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you liked them. I don't know that I've ever written purr-worthy haiku before.

The beta and I are having a spat: do you think I should add an exclamation point after Paris? I sort of want one but don't want to tamper with the thing if it works for you as is. He is indifferent.

ETA that I added the exclamation point. Please alert me if you think I've made a terrible misstep; I implicitly trust your judgment.

*sigh* If I were still doing yoga and pilates, I probably wouldn't be in this mess! Stupid desk job. But yes, I've been going to the chiropractor a couple of times a week, because I finally decided that the physical therapy was just aggravating it. I have waaay stronger muscle relaxers now and seem to be *knock wood* slowly mending. Thank you for your support and for wishing my pain on a hellgod. You're very cheering. :)

Re: Loud purring selinde2 April 17 2008, 12:31:04 UTC

Then back to Yoga for Dummies for you. Me too. Get well.

I am divided (I am inconsistent I contain multitudes) on exclamation points (screamers). How do you hear Spike saying it. Angry, or resigned. I read resigned. No screamer. With screamer, shouting. Less Japanese.

Re: Loud purring mere_ubu April 17 2008, 13:32:21 UTC

Hee! I defer to your wisdom. *chucks screamer over shoulder* Out it goes.

Have a lovely morning/day/evening. (I've got no sense of what time it is for you. I'm provincial that way. ) :)

Re: Loud purring selinde2 April 18 2008, 00:16:28 UTC

Thanks. It's Friday morning here, best working day of the week and the end of a looooong few days. My daughter is singing at the Canberra Balloon Festival launch tomorrow morning, which should make for a fun weekend. Hope yours is restful.

Re: Loud purring now TGIF mere_ubu April 18 2008, 14:59:55 UTC

Ah, then I wish you a great Friday evening and a wonderful weekend.

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