Longing to Belong - Chapter 16

[mercy2908]

Chapter 16

Birch Creek, September 2002

“Could you please describe the circumstances of the theft?”

Comments

[lalaith_paola]

Ooooh Rachel! She seems intetested but Teaspoon too isn't so indifferent to the blonde woman who she was so nice to help him with Lou's first period.
I love Lou's spunkiness and ger attitude...sooo typical of a young girl becoming a teenager.
And I wonder who Rachel's boys are! ^_^
Are them their natural children...or she runs a group home for certain orphaned kids! Or maybe I 'm completely wrong??

[mercy2908]

Rachel will play an important role in the story. There's clearly chemistry with Teaspoon. And the boys she mentions are her children, her real children.

I'm glad you like Lou's attitude. I think I need to show her in something more than the pitiful image as an orphan.

Thanks a lot!!!

[lalaith_paola]

Mmmh...I wonder how the other boys will be introduced then! (If you're going to introduce all of them and not only Kid...)

Little spunky Lou is my favourite! ^_^

[mercy2908]

I have plans to have the boys in the story in some way. Yet, I'm still trying to figure out how I'm going to do that. I don't have definite plans for two of them.

Thanks!!!