Served Cold | Chapter 7

[mercury_pheonix]

Title: Served Cold
Author: mercury_pheonix 
Fandom: Torchwood/Doctor Who
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Children of Earth Fix-It.
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Gray, Eleventh Doctor, Amy/Rory
Ratings/Warnings: R - sex, rape, abuse, torture.
Spoilers: All series.
Summary: When the Hub explodes, and the cryogenic chambers are flung open, one of its inhabitants

Comments

[savauge]

I am beginning to feel a little creepy; preying on your updates, lying in wait for the next installment.

I really should be asleep, but what does sleep matter when one can read excellent fanfiction?

My thoughts exactly.

[mercury_pheonix]

Yay, stalkers! It's nice that someone is actually stalking me for a change - usually it's me doing the stalking!

Thank you so much for your continuous support, and yes, for your stalking as well!

[milady_dragon]

Well, trust the Doctor to get himself put into a cell too. Of course, we can also trust him to get out of it.

As much as I don't really like how the Doctor treated Jack, I'm hoping there's some sort of understanding here, and they're all able to get out of there together. I could really tell how upset the Doctor seemed to be, even in Amy's POV, even is she didn't understand the reason for it.

I just wanted to hug Jack and Ianto both...

[mercury_pheonix]

Another reason I chose Eleven - because he is so different to Ten and Nine, and maybe would react differently. I felt that the revelation of the Doctor seeing Jack would be more poignant when seen from an outside perspective, from the view of Amy who has no idea about the history between the two of them. I'm glad that worked or you!

Thank you!!

[ms_bekahrose]

... But it can't end there!

A real kicker of a cliff-hanger. I loved it. Definitely enjoying the way you're writing Ianto and Jack, both so resigned to their fates, almost like the fight has gone out of them. And then, the way you're writing Eleven and Amy, it's really making me think. Which I love.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

[mercury_pheonix]

... But it can't end there!

Yes I can, for I am the writer!! *cackles*

Thank you so much. I've been trying to create some sort of contrast, interspersing the playfulness of Doctor Who (trying to make it like a believable episode for the show) with the darkness that our two boys are descending into.

Thank you!

[mcparrot]

I'm guessing there's some running coming up soon.

[mercury_pheonix]

Well, it is a cross between Doctor Who and Torchwood, there's bound to be some running somewhere...XP.

Thank you!

[owensheart]

OH NO! now the Doctor is in custody as well! but maybe this is part of his plan.

Graet chapter, I feel so heartsore for JAck in this, how he blames himself like that.

[mercury_pheonix]

This Doctor is very lackadaisical, so I couldn't bank on their really being a plan XP. He makes it up as he goes along, but he always makes it up well.

Thank you!