haiku

[mephistophylis]

The dried wakame
is now like black sesame--
all over my floor.

misuraru* ga
fueru wakame wo
tabechatta.

moshi neko ga
kore wo tabettara
shinjau no?

*mythral--my idiot cat.

(translations of the above haiku)
Uh, oh...Mythral ate the dried seaweed.

If a cat eats this...will it die?

Comments

[spatulagirl]

misuraru ga
fueta wakame wo
tabechatta
(the tta counts as two syllables)

moshi neko ga
kore wo tabettara
shinjau no?

(taberu in 'tara' form is 'tabettara' I think. and shinjaimasuka is 7 syllables, so shinjau + no (more natural form of question) sounds better, I think.

He should be fine. Are you gonna bring your cats with you to Japan?

[mephistophylis]

hahaha thanks for the corrections. I was thinking spoken syllables instead of written ones, so I tried to make it fit that way instead of using the natural-sounding one. Unfortunately, no. My cats are not coming with me to Japan. :( My brother is taking Myth, and Bear is becoming an outdoor cat at the farm.