Shards of Crusty Glass-Part Two

[meowbooks]

Title: Shards of Crusty Glass Part 2 of 4

Author:meowbooks

Rating: PG

Words:583

Characters: The Jar of Dirt, Jack, Tia Dalma, The Compass

Disclaimer:    Ah, no I don't own PotC.

Summary:This is an idea that I've had since DMC so no AWE spoilers are to be found here. The story of the Jar of Dirt! This is turning out a bit longer than expected...
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Comments

[kseenaa]

Nice! Very nice! :-D Thanx for linking me to this. :-) Will you write more of it? :-)

[kseenaa]

Definitely. We haven't reached Isla de Cruces yet. ;D

[meowbooks]

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[sunrise_sets]

Love it! :)

[meowbooks]

Thanks SS!

[aja_evenstar]

You just have no idea.

This? My god. This was amazing. I only hope one day i can write something as magical as the dirt insdie that jar.

Personally, there are too many things to comment on but there are a few points i need to make before i move on.

The whole concept of the jar not being the only object with thoughts and voices is amazing. The compass & chest items all speaking as well is so fantastic that my minds feels overloaded.

As well as that, back from part 1, i need to say that i love how you recognised that the jar would see the skin of all the other pirates as unusual after only having seen Tia Dalma. Its the small details like that, that really make a story what it is.

Lastly, can i just say that the way the jar observes Jack is adorable? Its like a small child observing their older sibling and taking everything in so they can model themselves in a similar fashion.

You have just become one of my favourite writers on his here site.

[meowbooks]

You're too kind to me, really. Thank you for taking time out of your day to read these little scribbles. :D

I liked how you described the jar, that's exactly it.It's trying to soak up as much as possible.

Much obliged,
meowbooks