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mentholpixie

Out of Time 1/3

Oct 22, 2016 18:04

Out of Time

Summary: In which a thirteen year old Sam finds himself in a strange bunker with a fever of what feels like a million degrees and a stranger claiming to be his brother. Set during the Trials.( Chapter One )

bigbrotherdean, de-agedsam, sicksam, fever, hurt/comfort, supernatural fanfiction, the trials

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mentholpixie October 22 2016, 18:13:34 UTC

Thanks for reading!

thelocation October 22 2016, 11:37:11 UTC

Oooooh i like! More please :)

mentholpixie October 22 2016, 18:53:27 UTC

Thank you! I'll update as soon as I can :)

lyryk October 22 2016, 11:48:07 UTC

I love how wee!Sam's hunter instincts kick in even though he's so disoriented. Looking forward to the next part. :-)

mentholpixie October 22 2016, 18:54:54 UTC

Thank you! Writing young Sam's reactions was really fun :)

ayane42 October 22 2016, 13:45:31 UTC

Eeee, i love this! Can't wait for more!

mentholpixie October 22 2016, 19:13:36 UTC

Thank you!

Hey mdnk October 22 2016, 15:12:42 UTC

Love all your stories and have been following you for years and years now when it was only fanfiction and it was early seasons. I don't read on fanficiton.net anymore and I'm glad to see you have also put things here too :). One thing, and this is totally just random, did you know that black background and white text is super hard for dyslexic people? Well it is for me for sure. I have an app that changes it to make it readable but I am always a tad frustrated when I stumble upon journals that only have black backgrounds. Just thought I'd mention it to get some awareness out there. Can't wait to read more of this story and many more to come
Cheers

RE: Hey mentholpixie October 22 2016, 22:07:27 UTC

Hey there, that sure sounds frustrating! I've changed the background so hopefully it's easier for everyone to read now. :)