Fic: Incorporating A Few Slight Adjustments by lavvyan (PG-13)

Oct 30, 2006 15:17

Title: Incorporating A Few Slight Adjustments
Author: lavvyan
Pairing or Character(s): MENSA-verse McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Um. Slash?
AN: For the "Getting To Know You" challenge (so obviously spoilers for M & MM).
"Look, what, my Sheppard is a know-it-all, my Teyla is hard to talk to, and, and my Ronon is… well, actually, those two are ( Read more... )

universe: mensa, pair: mensa!john/rod, author: lavvyan

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apple_pi October 30 2006, 14:29:41 UTC
Hee, that's very nice! I like how Rod feels like he's missing out, but he's still so wrapped up in being, well, himself that it takes him a while to figure out what's going on.

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lavvyan October 30 2006, 14:41:12 UTC
Thank you. :)

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ladycat777 October 30 2006, 14:40:48 UTC
Oh, yes. I like this Rod, who is so superficial as to be a jackass, so wrong inside his own skin -- something Rodney has never, ever been -- that it takes seeing what he should be to understand what he has. Lovely :)

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lavvyan October 30 2006, 14:48:00 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad this came over okay. :)

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temaris October 30 2006, 14:57:55 UTC
I like this, with Rod not really understanding that when you put on a mask, no one sees your face, and figuring it out, giving himself permission to let go of the mask -- and finding that other people give that back in return. And poor Sheppard, who *still* hasn't found something to flap McKay *g*. I'm sure he'll think of something though ;-)

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lavvyan October 30 2006, 15:22:54 UTC
He'll try, that's for sure. ;)

And thank you, I'm really glad this works for you. I was a little uncertain if Rod comes over as a believable character.

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thisissirius October 30 2006, 15:13:02 UTC
That is awesome! I'm totally starting to fall in love with the alt!Rod and alt!Sheppard and OMG you made it fun and good!

Thank you : )

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lavvyan October 30 2006, 15:25:22 UTC
Thank you very much! :)

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with_apostrophe October 30 2006, 15:38:15 UTC
I love the voyage of discovery you send Rod on - and how you contrast the differences between him and Rodney (this time he's cool rather than fine). And can you imagine our Rodney ever turning down anything sweet?

A true AU!

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lavvyan October 31 2006, 06:36:44 UTC
Thank you! I guess Rodney would do quite a few things for pancakes. *g*

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