FIC: Wraith

[memphis86]

SPN 3.09 really struck a chord with me, what can I say?

I hope you all like it.

Title: Wraith
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, Sam/OFCs, Sam/OMCs
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4,367
Warnings: Based off of a theme from SPN 3.09, so SPOILERS lie within.
Thanks: To katjad for 4am fic consulting while I succumbed to insomnia. To dev_earl, nomelon, & arabella_hope for keeping my run-ons

Comments

[fleshflutter]

Wow that was totally incredible. Awesome concept and they're both fucked-up and twisted and this was just perfect, yes. :)

[memphis86]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad it worked for you!! And it's such a big compliment since I think you handle the big twisty fics so damn well! :D

[dodificus]

I'm not sure if I buy 'all demons were humans' but it's such a fantastic *idea* and I love what you've done with it here.

And I especially love the way you've written Sam, that last line and what it means, kinda kicks everything on its end. And it hurts just the way I like to be hurt in fic:)

[memphis86]

Thanks so much!! I'm glad this was the good-hurty fic! ;D

[tabularassa]

Wow. Seriously, just wow. You are an incredibly brilliant girl and you've wowed me again. I might just have to rec this:) The concept and the yeah...all yeah.

♥

[memphis86]

Thank you sooooo much! And again for the rec! LOVE! ♥

[tabularassa]

My pleasure, honey bunny:)

[delphinapterus]

That was chilling. I love how it starts off as as though Sam, for all he's trying to be like Dean, is still uncertain and uncomfortable with it. I adore how things switch completely by the end. Sam comes off as slowly sliding from horror over the edge of understanding to being happy with demon-Dean and the choosing of his new hosts when there is the reveal that Sam has finally trapped demon-Dean. It's wonderful how it seems like Sam is still good and trying to send Dean back even though he loves having him back then there is the nasty little surprise that he has trapped Dean and it's not really out of love but retribution and the only thing stopping him was the need to find the right body for Dean's trap. I love how you tease throughout that maybe Sam is a little messed up but Dean is always worse until the end when it turns out that Sam is even more twisted than his demon brother. I really love how demon-Dean has such a zest for life and swapping hosts.

[memphis86]

Oh wow, I'm so glad you liked this story, and took the time to pull out all those elements the way you did. Thank you so much!! *smish*

[winterweathered]

Brilliant, brilliant concept, and perfectly executed. I loved the note it ended on.

[memphis86]

Oh thank you!! I'm so glad you liked the ending, I'm really happy with how it turned out.

Also Ruby in your icon makes me all kinds of happysigh.