Eight Cozy Nights (of Porn): Number Four!

[memphis86]

Psych was on tonight, oh happiness!

Um, this went waaaaay angstier then I (or perhaps you) expected, sorry, but I just kind of let it run. But hey, I got to porn a little. WIN!

(Schmoop will return tomorrow)

Title: Faded From The Winter
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,645
Notes: teaatsix requested: Anything that includes

Comments

[nu_breed]

Oooooh, I love this. Mystical and eerie and gorgeous.

[memphis86]

Thank you, so glad you liked it!

[dodificus]

This read like fairy tale, sad and wistful

[memphis86]

I'm glad that came through, I'm taking some style-risks here.

[rejeneration]

Memph, sweetie! This is just! HOMG. As dodificus said! It reads just like this sad, sad fairytale. And in some places a combination of nursery rhyme. Good lord, girl, I love your mind and the places it goes. I have to ask, is the "Your cheeks are red as roses, the tips of your ears, your nose..." from something? -smiling- Or is this just all pure Memph. I have no trouble believing the latter, but I have to ask. I'm just to enthralled.

The sex (or, pardon me for the purely girlie-moment, lovemaking) is exquisite. I love your use of language. Seriously, ever since the first piece I read. I can't say it enough, but you're terribly, incredibly clever.

Just one tiny typo I think: Sam kisses his collarbone, fascinated with the way it just out Juts, yes?

[memphis86]

Awww darlin'...

The line is probably mine unless I'm channeling some poem or folktale that I can't quite recall. Honestly I was thinking about Snow White and Rose Red for imagery, but neither plot was supposed to incorporate itself.

I am so glad this worked for you! I felt like trying something new, taking a big style-risk here, and I'm happy to hear if it did or didn't work.

And I love you like CRAZY. ♥

Thanks for the tip-off, damn evil sneaky typos!! *shakes fist*

[certainthings]

*cries* This was beautiful and I loved the Fairytale feel to it.

"What about your brother?" the hunter says picking his head up.

"He's not back yet. He's been gone a long time."

"Are you worried?"

"No," Sam smiles. "He always comes back to me."

*heartswells*

fascinated with the way it just out <--- you've a small typo

[memphis86]

Thank you soooo much, I'm glad the fairytale thing-y worked as I wanted it to.

*many hearts*

Eeeeesh, those ones are so tricky, thankew for the tip-off!

[delphinapterus]

I really like how the whole thing has a very dream like quality. The ending really exacerbates that feeling on a second read through. I like your use of cold and heat in this and Sam's statement-questions.

[memphis86]

Thank you so much! Glad to hear that imagery came through, so happy you liked!