FIC: You're The Whip In My Valise

[memphis86]

HI. I SLEEP NOW. RESPOND TO COMMENTYS AND FEEDBACKY PEOPLE LATER. I HAVE NO BRAIN LEFT, I'M AFRAID SOMEONE ATED IT D:

Title: You're The Whip In My Valise
Characters/Pairings: Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17, and I really mean it.
Word Count: 9,650
Warnings: BDSM, spankings, boys in corsets, bucketloads of kink.
Notes/Credits: For reel_spn, A J2 version of

Comments

[fourfreedoms]

How long have I been waiting for this now? Two months? Boy did it live up to expectation. The imagery, the descriptions of Jared's emotions, the care that Jensen shows him when he's trying so damned hard not to. Oh god. I just love it.

This is so sexy and evocative and I'm sure I'm ruining it by describing it too much, but seriously, it sticks with you.

"No." He's not anything. He's got percoset for flesh and valproic acid for blood.

SERIOUSLY!

I just love how you managed to say so much with the simplest dialogue. Vanilla and chocolate. Aiya.

[memphis86]

Oh thank you m'dear, it really does mean a lot to me that you like it! :D And next time I won't be such a huge procrastinator.

And of course, this means TOP GUN oughta come my way next! ;D

[mss_celestal]

*squees* OMG! That movie is one of my favorite movies ever! And this fic was so good, and so hot. I loved the control that Jensen wielded and how he wielded it. I think most people would have had Jensen as the submissive one, but I love Top!Jensen and it just fit so well!

Great job! I absolutely loved it!!

[berrylicious877]

I am in serious lust with your icon. BOYS IN EYELINER!!! HOT!!!!

[memphis86]

Thank you so much for reading it! I'm really glad you liked it!

And yeah, I kinda like Top!Jensen, I was surprised to see how many people were thrown by that? I mean just because Jared has a Sasquatch sized peen... :D

[star_dancer54]

Jeeeez this is amazing, seriously. *gestures weakly* So, so so rediculously awesome.

[memphis86]

Thank you so much!

[casspeach]

This was great! I love the film and you captured it's tone and mood just perfectly in this.

Just lovely.

I know I would want someone to point this out to me though, so I hope you don't mind:

And then the door clicks open, Sam closes his umbrella and walks inside.

I presume you mean Jared! ;-)

Now I have to go dig out my dvd and rewatch!

[memphis86]

Argh, Sam and Jared switch in my head sometimes, little dsylexic I am, D: Thanks for the heads-up!

And thank you for reading + commenting!

[mossylawn]

OMG!

I love you. I love you.
*makes out with you*

[memphis86]

EEE! <3

Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you liked it!