Ficlet: No Exit

[memphis86]

I wrote something I DON'T HATE. This is a cause for celebration.

For mini_moue, Hell is other people - Sartre
J2, PG-13, 1,075 words.

Comments

[fourfreedoms]

This reminds me of something. It's on the tip of my tongue, but I just can't quite parse it out. FRUSTRATION. I really liked this line: Jared leans back. "That's why I like taking your picture. Proof to the world that you existed at one point in time."

I also really liked Jared's internal thoughts. It was painful and real. And OMG yay, YOU'RE WRITING AGAIN!

[memphis86]

OMG YOU LIKE IT YAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! Which is all that matters to me, yanno. *nods*

If it helps, the opening scene was somewhat inspired by a scene in an X-Men comic?

[cherrymmm]

That was really great. I could FEEL it. Man, I missed your writing.

[memphis86]

Oh thank you so much, that is so nice of you to say! I'm hoping I can keep writing more!

[memphis86]

I am glad you don't hate it either!! And thank you for the interesting prompt to work around. I was trying to think like, Sartre, black and white and French existentialism and all.

[enablelove]

Oh man, that was amazing Mem. It was real and gritty in a way? IDK I fail with words.

but it was wonderful <3

[memphis86]

Oh, thank you for saying! I was going for 'gritty' in a way. I'm glad you liked this!

[hkath]

Ooooh, awesome job. So quiet and real. I loved him locked in the darkroom looking at all the pictures of Jensen.

[memphis86]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked that part, too!