Comments | memphis86: FIC: Trompe Le Monde (Et Mon Frére)

memphis86

FIC: Trompe Le Monde (Et Mon Frére)

Aug 01, 2007 00:13

Title: Trompe Le Monde (Et Mon Frére)
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 5,020

Summary: Dean likes to pretend he doesn't know what's really going on. Sam might be a horny psychic exhibitionist freak. They also hunt a swamp-thing and some fireflies.

Thanks: This wouldn't exist without dark_reaction's inspiration, wonderful encouragement & beta. * ( Read more... )

fic, supernatural, wincest, rating: nc-17

Comments 58

aynslee August 1 2007, 05:03:20 UTC

I love the back and forth game--it took me a minute to figure out what was going on, but it makes sense that they'd think it would be easier that way. Very cool fic!

memphis86 August 2 2007, 02:12:58 UTC

Thanks for reading + commenting!

runedgirl August 1 2007, 05:32:53 UTC

Damn, that was hot! I love the way Sam sees Dean, how beautiful he is in his eyes (and gotta say, I totally agree...) Great detail and description, and did I mention hot?? LOL

Lynsey

memphis86 August 2 2007, 02:13:32 UTC

Uh, yeah I second that, mmm Dean...

Thanks for commenting! :D

owzers August 1 2007, 05:42:25 UTC

This: 'Somewhere in the corner of his mind, a small petulant voice says: Hold me.

Dean turns over and wraps his arms around Sam.'

Was the perfect end to a beautifully hot, funny, slightly angsty, perfectly voiced fic. You are wonderful hon! Thank you for this.

memphis86 August 2 2007, 02:13:53 UTC

Ohh I'm so glad you liked the ending! Thank you!!

ex_rosegany August 1 2007, 05:48:35 UTC

Oh, Dean.

So clever and so silly all at once.

I loved the premise of this, and you executed with such humor and in-character banter and thoughts...

And then, of course, it was all kinds of hot :)

memphis86 August 2 2007, 02:18:34 UTC

Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it!

fourfreedoms August 1 2007, 05:57:00 UTC

You exposing your dorkishness in the form of lancet flukes and bunyips aside, I'm so happy that you actually went and wrote this fic. Seriously the idea that Dean would think it was a good idea? It's so crazy and yet in character at the same time.

As I mentioned earlier, I love the details you put into the visuals of Dean. Him in the shower and tackling Sam and ooooh everything. It's nice to be reminded of that sometimes.

Also: Sam is going to kill him. But after he's done. Not so nice, after all, Sam? I laughed so hard.

memphis86 August 2 2007, 02:22:05 UTC

FINE I LOVE BIOLOGY. THERE I SAID IT!

And thank you again for the reassurance, the beta and the comments were really helpful! And I'm glad I've ruined you for showers ;)

And you helped coax this fic out, so give yourself some props!

fourfreedoms August 2 2007, 04:21:08 UTC

Mostly when I'm showering I'm too tired to think about Dean. SO DON'T BE TOO TRIUMPHANT. MUAHAHAH.