Passport to the Galaxy (1/13) [PG-13]

[memory777]

Author: memory777
Pairing: Ten/Ianto (hints of Jack/Ianto)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ianto helps the Doctor stop aliens from invading Cardiff.
Disclaimer: RTD and the BBC own all these characters, I'm just borrowing them.
Authors Notes: I know this isn't perfect. I don't think I've got the voices down properly, although I did try. This is the first

Comments

[fatal_labyrinth]

OMG This is awesome! Gah, I definately have a new pairing to adore!

[memory777]

Wow, thanks for the comment! I was beginning to think this had slipped down the list without anyone seeing! I've almost finished hte second part, a few more edits and it should be up tommorow, then it's straight to work on the third part. I want to get as many parts done before it's back to school, which is a week on monday. :) Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and commenting!

[fatal_labyrinth]

Yay, I can't wait to find out what happens next! Heh, I go bk to school then too, which sucks as it totally prohibits my fanfic readin time! :P

[memory777]

It prohibits my writing time thanks to the tests I have when I go back. Which is another thing, writing may be slowed by revision....

[memory777]

Ack, was it (the tense changing) in the opening couple of paragraphs, because I'd originally wrote it in the present and then went back and changed them to the past. I must have missed some bits.

Thanks for reading though!

[memory777]

Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out!

[memory777]

Fixed both of them. Thanks!

[memory777]

Forgot to respond to your first bit about Jack!

Jack and the team will pop up again later in the series, and we'll find out how the all feel about the Doctor and Ianto. It'll be fun tow rite. :P