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Be Bold, But Not Too Bold (Vincent/Tifa, NC-17) 3/3

Sep 08, 2007 02:22

Title: Be Bold, But Not Too Bold
Characters/Pairing(s): FF7 post-DoC, Vincent/Tifa
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, antics, sex.
Notes: For bleuwyn. I hope it proves worth the wait!
Summary: “I mostly abandoned the idea once I'd managed to make you cry,” he admitted, “and finding out you think I'm a pedophile nailed the lid on that mostly shut.

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darknitedestiny September 8 2007, 23:27:25 UTC

Okay-I read this some several hours ago, and I know that I'm not going to get to say everything I want to on this, because my mind is kind of broken right now, and I probably will have forgotten some of it once I really get into other parts of it, because that always seems to happen. =)

I'm enamoured with this piece. I don't really know whatever had you worried! And I know that Bleu will love it. When I see you write Vince and Tifa together-it's so strange, knowing that you only just picked them up recently (as a couple, not generally, but you knew that), because they seem to fit so well the way you write them.

Their banter is so comfortable! There's a rhythm to it, a familiarity. They bounce off each other so nicely, like they're simply picking up where they left off some long time ago. Every joke, every dip in conversation is well-placed, and I feel like I know your Tifa by now, having seen her in a couple stories of yours, the way I get to see what's running through her head. Clearly you've established her character since long- ( ... )

memoriamvictus September 9 2007, 01:56:37 UTC

one of them being the line, "I hope you take it as a compliment, at least"-because god knows where I heard that the first time from you.Bahaha! I honestly didn't realize I'd recycled that until you pointed it out. I really ought to get cracking and finish that one; I leave fics that need to get worked on out on my desktop to guilt me into paying attention to them, and with my luck, some day, someone is going to click on it ( ... )

darknitedestiny September 9 2007, 02:31:02 UTC

I can just view the code source from LJ and copy it into my own editor. Thank you much!

And yes, it is nice to see them act like adults. It probably helps that an adult is writing it. XD

memoriamvictus September 9 2007, 03:08:01 UTC

You wound me to the quick!

darknitedestiny September 9 2007, 03:17:32 UTC

Eh?

I still think the phrase, "It was in our best interest not to let you get smacked around too much," owns all.

memoriamvictus September 9 2007, 04:11:59 UTC

We're all doomed if I can pass as the voice of age and wisdom, even in a dim light. :)

And, really, it's one thing to accept people for who they are, problems and all, but transforming into a selection of horror film stars when distressed isn't exactly something you can brush off!

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