ooc; crit post
✪ If you feel that there is something wrong with his voice, or that I've missed a key part of his personality.
✪ If you feel that his connection with your muse isn't right, or you'd like to discuss anything concerning them, their relationship or whatever else.
✪ If you have any ooc problems with him ie. he isn't online enough or he should scene more etc.
✪ If you have any questions or concerns about my muse, his characterization or his real, feel free to ask!
Constructive criticism, both positive and negative, is highly appreciated so be completely honest about anything and everything. I'm more than happy to explain or fix things that need fixing, my muse is always a work in progress.
Comments are screened, anon is enabled.