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1007. that time of the month!

Jun 02, 2012 17:24

How's My Driving?

I think everyone knows what this is for! Give the players you love CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on how they play their characters and how they can be improved. We all need a little help every now and then!

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Sebastian Smyth I glee I come at me bro. gleefulvillain June 2 2012, 22:31:48 UTC

blainewanderson June 3 2012, 11:17:18 UTC

For the few tags you played with my Blaine, I thought Sebastian was very in character, you have his cockiness, smugness, and conceit down pat.

gleefulvillain June 3 2012, 15:53:30 UTC

You know that game they make high school students play in drama? "Yes, let's"? You're kind of like that. You constantly introduce new ideas into your threads, especially conversationally, as well as responding to what you're given. It makes you a dynamic and exciting player to thread with. You're very IC, which more than compensates for the few spelling/grammar errors I've noticed. Hope that wasn't too much of a backhanded compliment.

helosthisshoe June 2 2012, 22:32:48 UTC

Supernatural

Sam Winchester | ( ... )

willneversayyes June 2 2012, 22:47:30 UTC

I really wish I had something constructive to say, but I'm going to be brutally honest.

You're fantastic. Seriously. Don't change.

XD Admit it. I scared you for a second, didn't I?

helosthisshoe June 3 2012, 00:34:38 UTC

Haha, thank you so much! Glad you think so! :D hearts;

whatheneeds June 2 2012, 23:46:38 UTC

Love our vamp threads a lot, and pretty much love you in general. That is all

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colorlessword June 2 2012, 22:47:45 UTC

prince_traitor June 4 2012, 16:41:46 UTC

Only a few tags into one thread with you but already think you're doing an awesome job at playing Dean. He's a really tricky muse to get the right voice pinned for and from my what I've seen so far you've nailed it.

Keep up the good work!

colorlessword June 4 2012, 17:49:25 UTC

Oh wow. Thank you very much.

/Poor Kurda. Dean isn't fond of him riding around in his baby.

shieldmorsecode June 2 2012, 23:18:06 UTC

Just Bobbi here. And as I've only been playing her for a few weeks, I'd really appreciate some feedback.

mr_metallicar June 2 2012, 23:24:52 UTC

Serena Dana Winchester // theviltwin // Supernatural AU
63!The Impala // mr_metallicar // Supernatural AU
The Impala // madein_67 // Supernatural AU
Claire Novak // innocentno_more // Supernatural AU

While I love to hear constructive HMD for people, if you would like to plot with any of my characters, feel fee to leave a note on it. :D

mr_metallicar June 2 2012, 23:54:02 UTC

I'm sorry to say this, but your Claire is a little creepy. From what I've seen, you've been using her for sex a lot, and considering she probably wasn't even a teenager when she made her appearance, and it's only been three years, she can only be maybe 15. That you're using her to sex with Dean makes it worse, because he's in his mid-to-late thirties, and simply wouldn't engage in intercourse with someone young enough to be his daughter.

Using these characters to engage in sex with the main cast seems to be their overall purpose, so while the humanized idea is creative, a little more character development and an improvement on overall quality would be a nice change to see.

mr_metallicar June 3 2012, 00:00:57 UTC

I have to agree with this crit. It seems like the mun plays several characters with the express purpose of smut with Dean Winchester and Claire specifically is aged up in a way that I find to be kind of creepy.

I also think there's a problem with Claire's backstory that they've worked out, because it contains a lot of triggery content without any warning. If you're going to make things like that up for a character when there's no canon to back it up, you need to be more open about warnings. Talking about child abuse can be incredibly triggering. There should be a warning in the muse's profile that it might come up and you shouldn't just spring it on other players.

mr_metallicar June 3 2012, 00:07:38 UTC

I am aware of my aging of Claire being miscalculated but when I designed her, I wanted to make her older. I worked on her back story for awhile and the back story I made was to make her older so I bended it slightly to make that possible. Lots of people do that and as for the Dean thing, she's been pretty messed up fro most of her life and she's built on having daddy issues which also makes her have a kink for older males but she crushes on Dean for many reasons. Sure, maybe Dean wouldn't have sex her but I have come across a few who were willing. It all depends on the person.

I've actually have been making many posts with all of my characters to develop serious plot lines without sex but they either get abandon after awhile or no one tags them. I'm not blaming anyone but I do put out effort to make serious lines and verses.

As for triggers from the other tag, I'm very sorry for not putting up notifications of that. I will edit my profile to do so in just.

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