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melusine474

Unforgivable (WIP)

May 23, 2008 23:35

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17, as always
Pairing: WolfYuu/Yuuram
Warnings this part: None, apart from the rating.
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent/statutory rape, issues of forcible rape
Spoilers: Through season 2. May increase later.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, ( Read more... )

wolfyuu/yuuram, fic:unforgivable, kkm, greta, wip, fic

Comments 16

neocloud9 May 25 2008, 03:15:29 UTC

Goodness! What an emotional roller-coaster in a single chapter~

MORE SOON PLZ?

melusine474 May 25 2008, 18:48:22 UTC

and it only gets more intense from there... XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

(yes, more soon...)

geetac May 25 2008, 03:42:18 UTC

Good story

melusine474 May 25 2008, 18:48:46 UTC

Thanks!

amadarenishi May 25 2008, 09:57:47 UTC

Unsolved Sexual Tension is love. Poor Greta, hopefully they'll get to know what really happened and punish those who did it to her.

But Wolf x Yuu, OMG. Awesome! Can't wait to read more!

melusine474 May 25 2008, 18:50:58 UTC

Thank you!

Poor Greta indeed... Sometimes I almost feel guilty for what I put my characters through ><

But, yay! I'm glad you like it<3

gingerbreadmoon May 25 2008, 22:05:29 UTC

This is amazing XD More please!

melusine474 May 25 2008, 22:10:33 UTC

Thanks! More soon^^

wizli May 26 2008, 03:00:30 UTC

Wow, what a great first chapter. Your take on Yuuri is really great, so deep in denial about his feelings for Wolfram but unable to hold them up anymore. He's a total wimp, yes, and Wolfram is a saint with almost infinite patience. You got Yuuri totally right; in books/manga/anime canon he's always going on and on about how beautiful and prince-like Wolfram is, how he thinks Wolf's his best friend and a part of his family, how much he worries when Wolf's in danger, how he doesn't kick him out of his bed...

I totally didn't expect Great to have that kind of feelings for Wolfram!. I had thought *coughcough* she would be closer to Yuuri, specially viceversa, but nobody can blame her 'cause her papa Wolfram is very attractive ♥. Now, after what happened to her, she seems to be in some kind of post traumatic stress disorder, acting so rational and unfeeling, and her parents are so into each other that don't notice her. Poor Greta...

I wonder what'll happen in the next chapters, can't wait to read it!.

melusine474 May 26 2008, 03:46:52 UTC

Thank you so much for the awesome comment<3

I'm really glad my Yuuri is coming across well. I've written several different ways for him to deal with the "gay" issue, and I think so far this one is my favorite XD

Poor Greta indeed... *hugs her*

Thanks again for the review. This is turning out to be nice and motivating. Next part will probably be up in the next few days.