Talk: Final part!

[melusine474]

Title: Talk
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Wolfram/OFC, Wolfram/Yuuri, Yuuri/Wolfram
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc. belong to Tomo Takabayashi and various other people/companies, none of whom are me. This is a fan work; no profit is being made, and no

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[xinue]

How is it possible that I hate Wolfram now more the ever. Seriously, I want to bash his head in the wall. For some reason I just wanted Yuuri to go and find some one else, Wolfram can close to almost not deserving Yuuri. Now, I wish the sleeping rumor was true! The whole Wolfram reaching for breast while kissing Yuuri disgusted me too, Ah!

But...for you to be able to provoke such feelings in me shows how great of a writer you were. Good job, and I am glad that they now have a child together, it sweet. Thanks for the story.

[melusine474]

awww. Maybe I am just a hopeless Wolfram sympathizer, but I have to admit I did not foresee such a reaction. Then again, I can see how the reaching-for-a-breast thing might be particularly upsetting. I included it because I think it's realistic (I've done it before 0.0;;;) and, yes, I suppose I tend to go for the deep cut >.>

Anyways, I hope you were not too upset <3 and thank you so much for the comments! *hugs*

[xinue]

Ah, I read my comment before and I kind of realized that it is never good to read a fic with my omnipresent Yuuri-bias-sympathizer-love eyeglasses on.

So I read through the story again with an more open mind and came to the conclusion of, "Wow Yuuri you really messed up here." And no wonder Wolf did what he did (I don't like it) but I understand. Also, this makes me understand and appreciate Wolfram's reluctance to jump back into the relationship.

Though the whole kiss in front of him and breast reaching was exceptionally cruel to Yuuri. <--Sorry I tend to be a Yuuri fangirl until the end.

Anyway, I want to state again how awesome this story was and thank you for writing it!

[melusine474]

aw I'm flattered you read whole fic again. I'm glad your feelings changed a little, just because at first I was worried that I wasn't at all getting across what I wanted to get across.

Thanks for the bonus comment! :D
<3<3<3

[iczer6]

On one hand I'm glad that Wolfram didn't take Yuuri back and that Yuuri actually had to deal witht he consquences of actions and actually work to get Wolfram back.

On the other hand I'm not that fond of Cassandra, I don't like Wolfram with women and to be honest she just came off as a little too perfect and giving.

[melusine474]

On one hand I'm glad that Wolfram didn't take Yuuri back and that Yuuri actually had to deal witht he consquences of actions and actually work to get Wolfram back.
^^ thank you

On the other hand I'm not that fond of Cassandra, I don't like Wolfram with women and to be honest she just came off as a little too perfect and giving.
Ah, I was afraid of that. I was also afraid she would come off as too selfish. It's very hard to get that balance. I don't see her as all that giving, though-- She does want Wolfram to be happy but she doesn't exactly give up a whole lot to make that happen. She gives him up because she doesn't actually need him, and she gives up the baby because she never wanted it in the first place. *fails at getting stuff across*

Thank you for the comment and the concrit!! <3 I hope the story was at least enjoyable even though Wolfram was with a woman for a while^^;;

[iczer6]

I think my issue with Cassandra is that she seems to willing to push Wolfram on Yuuri. I thinks she has some legitimate reasons to dump him frankly.

I enjoyed the story.

[melusine474]

Well, as long as you enjoyed it I'm happy <3

[chiisai_neko]

Aw, yay! I'm so happy everything worked out in the end. ^_^

[melusine474]

^.^ Yay. Glad to make you happy. Thanks for commenting! <3

[neocloud9]

Haha, all that drama and it ends with childish bickering. I love it. XD

[melusine474]

XDDD <3

warning: teal dear crossing

[seamusog]

I read the second part this morning and I was left with a gyah!face and cursing you for writing so well and leaving me hanging

Re: warning: teal dear crossing

[melusine474]

^/////////////////^

Thank you!!

That's crazy about your shelved fic! I must have clairvoyantly sensed it so I'm sorry for the psychic plagiarizm XD You should write it, though! You should write more in general. (Yeah, yeah, I can't talk. Just sayin'.)

So, yeah, akjkfjakjgkjagfkjadf;glkjTHANKYOU for all the compliments. You seem to have picked up on everything I intended, so YAY.

<3