Unforgivable-- Chapter VII, part 2

[melusine474]

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: WolfYuu/Yuuram, Greta
Warnings this part: Statutory rape, issues of rape, incest
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent, statutory rape, issues of rape
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc.

Comments

[anonymous]

I was waiting for soooo long for the next charter and there it is !!!!! and as brilliant as ever. It`s really sad to watch them to straggle with this problem, but on the other side theirs behavior is so realistic. Yuuri trying to understand, and being the clueless wimp, making the situation only gets worse… and Wolfram is so Wolfram. Being stubborn and prideful of course that he want to forget everything and never, never hear, speak or remember about past.
I can understand how Wolfram is able to live with Conrad at the same place. He pretends that nothing happened, but how Conrad is able to live with Wolfram … to see him every day, to speak after that he had done to Wolfram
And as I understand Gwendal doesn’t know about it, in other case I suspect Conrad would be exiled or dead.
Wolfram is unbelievable strong, mentally I mean. After all of this he still wants to take care of Yuuri. I understand that he is terrified, but still he fights. Yuuri should be (in my opinion) very careful with his interactions with Wolfram. He shouldn’t try to anything which require a lot of effort, he should act step by step, small acts which gradually can restore Wolfram`s trust.

Anyway all your chapters are magnificent :] and I hope that you will update soon, I will be waiting :] and sorry for grammar and other mistakes
Ashram

[melusine474]

Yay! I'm glad you like the fic and think the behavior is realistic and in character. That is generally my number one priority.

Thanks for the awesome review! Updating as soon as possible ^.~

<3