Comments | melting_pot_inc: Before the Sun Breaks Another Day -- Chapter Seventeen (cont'd)

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Before the Sun Breaks Another Day -- Chapter Seventeen (cont'd)

Mar 03, 2011 09:51

fic: before the sun breaks another day, fandom: merlin

Comments 75

ravenflight21 March 3 2011, 22:51:27 UTC

Congratulations to you both on your wonderful epic! As you know, I've been happy to be swept along with your organically growing story - thank you for the privilege. <3

accordingtomel March 4 2011, 18:05:44 UTC

Thanks so very much! We've both been eternally grateful to you for your support and assistance along the way. It's been a long journey and it feels so good to finally have reached the end. Thank you again for everything ♥

adelagia March 9 2011, 22:56:18 UTC

Thank you so much for all your help, hon! *glomps* We couldn't have done it without you! ♥

siennis March 4 2011, 05:30:38 UTC

This was an amazing story, so beautifully written ♥ You both should be very very proud!

accordingtomel March 4 2011, 18:07:51 UTC

Awww, thank you so much. This is such a wonderful comment to hear and I'm beyond thrilled that you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for your sweet feedback, and thank you so much for taking the time to read! ♥

adelagia March 9 2011, 22:57:27 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it; thanks so much for reading! :)

bohemiabythesea March 4 2011, 15:15:58 UTC

NOOOOO, it's finished! But it is fantastic, and I will now read it all again, and my work can go and hide somewhere for all I care. I love the continuous banter, even in the very touching scenes, and the way you nailed the voices.

Loved this very much!

accordingtomel March 4 2011, 18:14:00 UTC

Hee! Sorry that it's finished, but it had to come to an end eventually, LOL! ;) It makes me so glad to hear that you plan to read it again. Just don't go getting yourself in trouble at work for slacking off, haha! Also, we both worked so hard to be true to the characters, so it's immensely satisfying to hear that you felt we were able to capture their voices.

Thank you again for your kind feedback both now as well as all along the way :D

bohemiabythesea March 5 2011, 10:56:38 UTC

Nah, luckily, this would be my own time I'd be stealing from.

Yes, I loved it very much! I'l be looking forward to future writing!

adelagia March 9 2011, 22:59:20 UTC

Thank you so much, hon! I'm so happy you've stuck with us all the way through -- thank you for being such a conscientious commenter at every chapter, by the way! -- and that the fic as a whole has stayed with you.

jasminhd March 5 2011, 04:56:15 UTC

This was a great fic! I really enjoyed it. :)

accordingtomel March 6 2011, 17:28:32 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really pleased to hear that you enjoyed it :)

adelagia March 9 2011, 22:59:43 UTC

Thanks for reading! :)

sneakytoaster March 5 2011, 18:57:31 UTC

took me a couple of hours but I have finished this monster of epic awesomeness! honestly, this was so lovely and frankly the merlin script writers need to take note if the fanfic is better than the writing for the show. Though, I have to admit what really brought me on board with the morgana story line( I have never really liked her character as much as I have tried, and well then season three happened and I just...grr so annoying) was leon. I LOVE LOVE Sir Leon. The way he was depicted here was marvelous and really encompassed him as a character( which the writers could also expand upon given the clear fandom love that saved him from being killed off)....
this has gotten very rambly but Arthur and Merlin were wonderful in this fic, the affection between them mixed with their usual snark made the progression in their relationship very believable( and fracken adorable!)
so anyway, this was a wonderful read and one I will likely read again. well done :)

accordingtomel March 6 2011, 17:35:29 UTC

Wow, thank you SO MUCH for such a wonderful comment. We put a great deal of effort into building the story and the characters and it means so much to me to hear you say you felt we did it better than the show *blushes* :)

I'm pleased to hear that you enjoyed Leon in this, because we also loved having him in the fic. Especially since he wasn't originally supposed to have such a significant role. And yay for you enjoying the Merlin/Arthur dynamic as well! They're so much fun to write :)

Don't worry about being rambly; I enjoy rambly comments ;). Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely feedback! :D You are too kind!

adelagia March 9 2011, 23:20:27 UTC

Aw, thank you so much for your kind comments! We were really excited when we decided to bring Leon into the story and flesh out a little bit of a backstory for him, so I'm glad you liked his part so much -- and M/A, of course!

And just so you know, lots of writers love getting rambly comments! :) Thanks so much for taking the time to leave one!