Before the Sun Breaks Another Day -- Chapter Sixteen

[adelagia]

Title: Before the Sun Breaks Another Day
Authors: accordingtomel & adelagia
Summary: Three months after her disappearance, Morgana returns to Camelot with a hidden agenda, but she's not the only one keeping secrets, and a series of unintended revelations forces her, Merlin and Arthur on an intertwined journey of revenge, redemption and love.
Pairings: Merlin/Arthur,

Comments

[accordingtomel]

You should know that I always look forward to your comments, because they're so detailed and so kind and they just make me grin from ear to ear! This one was no exception, of course :)

I'm sorry that this chapter made you cry, but then I suppose that's probably a good thing :). Yes, Merlin and Arthur sure have been through a lot in this fic, haven't they? Especially Arthur, who's been forced to come to terms with his feelings for Merlin, while also dealing with a million other things, including the magic reveal and Merlin's near death.

I'm glad you liked Gaius' nonchalance about the closeness of Merlin and Arthur's relationship. I see him as being a little concerned for Merlin's well-being, but he also knows Arthur and can see the genuine love he has for Merlin. So as long as they're happy, I don't think he'd interfere.

So glad that you enjoyed the Gwen/Leon/Morgana scene. Yeah, we both really miss the Gwen/Morgana friendship, so we tried to incorporate it as much as we could. I'm happy that you enjoyed their interactions and Gwen's attempt at pushing Morgana gently in the right direction :)

It also makes me very happy to hear that you're shipping them so hard, and I'm glad you enjoyed their kiss. (We did too :D)

I think the reunion scene was a very important one for both of them, but especially for Arthur (as mentioned above). I'm sorry it made you cry so hard, but I'm beyond thrilled that it touched you in the way that it did.

Thank you for all your amazing comments! They are always an immense pleasure to read :D