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Before the Sun Breaks Another Day -- Chapter Six

Oct 02, 2010 20:37

Title: Before the Sun Breaks Another Day
Authors: accordingtomel & adelagia
Summary: Three months after her disappearance, Morgana returns to Camelot with a hidden agenda, but she's not the only one keeping secrets, and a series of unintended revelations forces her, Merlin and Arthur on an intertwined journey of revenge, redemption and love.
Pairings: Merlin/Arthur, ( Read more... )

fic: before the sun breaks another day, fandom: merlin

Comments 8

bohemiabythesea October 3 2010, 17:44:32 UTC

Ooh, update! This was,again, very lovely - and, aw, they are heartwrenching. Stand in your own ways, why don't you.

Also, I had a lot of fun with the dialogue and with lines like this one:
...and muttered a few culturally insensitive remarks about the whole of the reptilian kingdom.

adelagia October 3 2010, 18:52:22 UTC

Thank you so much! That M/A scene is one of our favourites, so I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. And thanks for being such a diligent reviewer :)

bohemiabythesea October 4 2010, 13:57:09 UTC

Well, you got the voices down really well in that scene. And I enjoy reading it, so I don't mind passing on my compliments!

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adelagia October 5 2010, 06:58:18 UTC

Thanks very much! We are pretty fond of that M/A scene ourselves. Hooray for awkward boys in love :)

applebacardi October 3 2010, 23:40:06 UTC

I love reading about Morgana seducing Uther, it's an interesting concept. I love the Merlin/Arthur scene with the "back rub", LOL ;) Arthur smells like rainbows. Of course he does. Can't wait for the next chapter!

adelagia October 5 2010, 07:13:28 UTC

Heheh, your Gwen icon is quite appropriate to Morgana seducing Uther. Glad you're liking where we're taking Morgana, though!

The M/A scene was great to write; silly boys. :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

timetraveller90 October 7 2010, 12:55:39 UTC

Oh great new update =D

Loved the Merlin / Arthur moment, it was beautifully writtent and heartbreaking at the same time with Merlin's thoughts about everything.

I missed Morgana/Leon interraction in this chapter but I really enjoyed the way you write Morgana, she's not a bad person and she still questions what she's doing which is totally something I would expect from her.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
By the way, how many do you plan having (not sure if you've mentioned it in an earlier post)

accordingtomel October 9 2010, 04:48:17 UTC

Hey! Thank you so much (and apologies for the late reply... the notifications weren't working for me). So glad to hear you enjoyed the M/A scene -- it's one of our favourites in the fic, so yay! :D

Yeah, I know this chapter was lacking the L/Mor interaction but rest assured, more is on the way for them :). And I'm glad that you don't think Morgana is a bad person, because that's exactly what we're trying to portray. She's conflicted and struggling and trying to figure out her place in the world.

As to how many chapters, we're not 100% sure, but I'm guessing that the total will end up being around 15-16 or so. We haven't quite finished the last handful of chapters, so it might be shorter or longer based on how long each scene ends up being, but that's probably a logical guesstimation. Hopefully that helps :)

Anyway, thanks again! Your comments are greatly appreciated :D