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ignore previous entry if you wish, ive clamed down. =]
read this im entering it in the reflections contest. i hope i do well. this is just a rough draft btw.
Happiness, the true definition of my life, and marching band the true definition of my happiness. Feeling the cool smooth grass beneath your feet, and the nippy wind in your face. Having the music explode from your instrument with a triumph beat. Hearing the melody float around your eyes, the music dancing around your heart. Watching the drum major move her hands majestically to her own rhythm, leading the band. The truth is never in my life have I ever witnessed something so emotional as marching to the ballad on a grassy field. The passion coming from each player’s instrument is so over-powering I cannot help but share the emotion. I can see everyone fervently producing their parts, each striving to help us receive that first place award. The tears that poured down each senior’s face stabbed my heart as my own eyes welled in sadness. Now I sit back and wonder why marching band had to end.
it's 158 words and our limit is 200 i believe so im not sure if im going to add more or not.
feedback?
read this im entering it in the reflections contest. i hope i do well. this is just a rough draft btw.
Happiness, the true definition of my life, and marching band the true definition of my happiness. Feeling the cool smooth grass beneath your feet, and the nippy wind in your face. Having the music explode from your instrument with a triumph beat. Hearing the melody float around your eyes, the music dancing around your heart. Watching the drum major move her hands majestically to her own rhythm, leading the band. The truth is never in my life have I ever witnessed something so emotional as marching to the ballad on a grassy field. The passion coming from each player’s instrument is so over-powering I cannot help but share the emotion. I can see everyone fervently producing their parts, each striving to help us receive that first place award. The tears that poured down each senior’s face stabbed my heart as my own eyes welled in sadness. Now I sit back and wonder why marching band had to end.
it's 158 words and our limit is 200 i believe so im not sure if im going to add more or not.
feedback?