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Aug 09, 2006 19:09

I thought it would be fun if you, as a writer, would indulge me by writing a few paragraphs--ANONYMOUSLY--in a comment and let me try to guess who you are. just be yourself as hard as you can be and write some fiction, be it fanfiction or original works. You can make it really long if you want. Like a quadrupled times 284 drabble ^__ ( Read more... )

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"Nefarious" - Original Work anonymous August 10 2006, 21:18:30 UTC
The full moon shone bright as a strong gust swept along the streets piles of litter, trash, and leaves. Old discarded candy wrappers, cigarette butts, and bottles filtered through the deserted paved pathways with a week old newspaper.

This part of the city had been abandoned for years. Everything that could have been worth anything had log since been looted. The houses and buildings were boarded up, graffiti covering almost every square inch. Windows were near non-existent, the shards of their former whole existences shattered beneath them and sticking out from their panes at dangerous, odd angles.

The front page of the New Age Rhythm fluttered about the quieted streets bringing to its most important news of the Teras Point Tragedy to the abandoned establishments. It caressed the sidewalks, letting every dried ink letter slide against the smooth pavement imparting to the city its knowledge of mankind’s most recent devastation ( ... )

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Re: "Nefarious" - Original Work anonymous August 10 2006, 21:19:25 UTC
“Heh,” a grin spread across his features, but only momentarily as bullets were pelting the grass and pavement behind him. “Not gonna catch me that easily,” he said to no one in particular. His voice was deep and gruff, and as soon as he hit the curb of the street, he jumped high into the air. The bullets followed his upward arc; finally on the sunless horizon, his would-be assassins and captors appeared ( ... )

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Re: "Nefarious" - Original Work mellie August 10 2006, 23:45:54 UTC
gonna have to go with Jackie.

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Re: "Nefarious" - Original Work fantasticjackie August 11 2006, 01:27:28 UTC
Booya! You got me. XD

Now I can post the whole thing on my LJ! =D

Seriously, I started writing just for the scenery, and then I was like, "Woah. Who's this dude with the red hair??" O.O And now, I can't stop writing this story. XD

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Re: "Nefarious" - Original Work mellie August 11 2006, 01:28:12 UTC
ahaha XD It's a good story! I like all the imagery. It really sets the scene. And yes, I wanna know who red head is!

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Re: "Nefarious" - Original Work fantasticjackie August 12 2006, 04:22:28 UTC
^_^ Thanky thanky!

That's actually the first time I've had fun with imagery in a LONG time. (Normally, I skip it until I'm typing it up because it. is. so. TEDIOUS!)

I started writing the second part to it last night... >.> Though I got hung up on names, so I didn't actually write much. ^^;; I can't wait to write these next conversations, though.

I posted the rest of the first part on my LJ, though, if ya' didn't see it. ^_~

And love triangles?? Phhhbbt! I've got a love quadrilateral...thing...y... type dilly. O.o Drew out the chart last night. ^_^

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Dude. I've GOT to get back to writing The Man. O.O;;

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