Comments | melles76: White Collar Fic "When it rains, it pours", Parts 6 & 7

melles76

White Collar Fic "When it rains, it pours", Parts 6 & 7

Oct 05, 2013 22:14

When it rains, it pours

See Chapter 1 for more information

Chapter 6
( More under the cut )

Comments 10

nieseryjna October 5 2013, 21:04:19 UTC

that was fun part, especially the memories and the gentle teasing between Peter and Neal :) And the murder mystery is slowly coming to the front....

melles76 October 7 2013, 18:38:35 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, the mystery will be solved in one of the next chapters...

pipilj October 7 2013, 12:04:05 UTC

This was nice a glimpse into Peter's family, Neal interaction with them was fun. Looking fwd to more.

melles76 October 7 2013, 18:39:55 UTC

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had lots of fun writing it especially the part with Neal and the kids since he sometimes behaves like a little one ;-)

love_82 October 7 2013, 18:25:23 UTC

I realized I didn't comment on this yet. I have been enjoying this story. Is this the one you mentioned you were stuck on?

I like Neal meeting Peter's family and of course their banter and teasing. :)

And there is a murder mystery to solve. Which I am assuming will not go well for our guys. :)

melles76 October 7 2013, 18:42:35 UTC

Hey, thank you very much!!
And no, this one is finished...
Yeah, I had lots of funny moments writing the banter and bickering. As for the murder mystery...well, there will be some obstacles to overcome especially for Neal. But there will be some adventures for Peter as well, so stay tuned!

sanuye12 October 8 2013, 11:00:27 UTC

I enjoyed learning about Peter's family. Also I was relieved (and amused!) that Neal chose to be honest with Peter's Mother. (Good, Neal!) I just really liked that scene. All the characters are well drawn. Nice story. I look forward to the murder mystery some day.

melles76 October 9 2013, 19:30:59 UTC

Yeah, well, Neal can charm any woman, right? I'm really glad you liked the chapters so far. There's more to come...

aragarna October 8 2013, 13:42:23 UTC

Finally catching up ! Sorry for the late comments !
nice scenes between Neal and the kids and everyone at home.
LOL about the Tik Tok dance !

Can't wait to see more of that mysterious murder....

melles76 October 9 2013, 19:33:31 UTC

Don't worry! I'm happy to hear from you at any time. I really LOVE the dancing video of Tim and Matt and I HAD to write about it, no matter what. The mystery of the murder is going to be solved soon...