Fic: No Ordinary Birthday

[melissima]

Title: No Ordinary Birthday
Series/Universe: Any Other Friday
Fandom: Numb3rs
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Rating: NC-17 FRAO
Spoilers: Pilot, I suppose?
Summary: Don doesn't know what he wants for his birthday until he gets it.

Comments

[rubynye]

OMG TOPPY CHARLIE IS HOT LIKE UNTO FIRE.

*melts into a quivering puddle of ecstacy*

[melissima]

I so agree! Thank you very much.

Don't suppose I can wheedle you into writing Toppy!Charlie for me someday? :D

Also do you ever sleep, woman? /sends warm milk/

[admiralandrea]

Holy shit! Happy New Year to us! I just sat and read that with my coffee mug in my hand, unfinished and forgotten, that's how damn hot and beguiling it was. Phew!

(You chose the perfect icon for it too *g*)

[melissima]

Yay! Thanks, Andi. I've been flailing over this one for an embarrassingly long time, but I think I like it now.

"damn hot and beguiling" is pretty much what I was going for. :Beams:

Happy New Year!

[toomuchfandom]

*flails*

*falls down on the floor*

*crawls back up*

Now, THAT is a great way to start the new year. So hot!

[melissima]

Hee!

/scatters pillows on the floor just a tad too late...pets you and sends Magnus to kiss the bruises/

Thank you. I'm rather fond of Charlie when he's bossy. :D

Happy New Year!

[t_vo0810]

I cannot tell u how happy it makes me that we share a kink for bossy!charlie bottoming from top. GUH! so hawt that it warmed a hellavu lot more than just the cockles of my heart! Like andi, my coffee went cold and forgotten but then all i had to do is hold it to my screen and ur fic had it boiling in 0.2 seconds. so lets see if i can name all the things I ADORE about his fic:
1)"Hey, Pop!" His voice is light; his eyes smolder. This is the greatest device ever!!!!!!! The thought of Charlie eyefucking his brother while feigning a casual innocence for his dad on the phone. OMG! once again, i want to live in ur brain and take lessons at its feet. There is something unforgivably hot about this! :D
2)The phone clicks shut and Charlie lets it thump to the floor. "Drop 'em." OMFG My panties dropped all by themselves when i read this line. GUH!
3)Charlie lets Don's finger go, stops moving except for a hand he drops hard on Don's chest to keep himself from sliding farther forward. "Give me your hands

[melissima]

Hee! It's Manna time!

1) I am a dirty, dirty girl. /tries to feel guilty/ ... /fails/.

2) Hee! Sorry? /passes fresh panties/

3) I had lots of help working out how this dynamic would shift over time. Emma rules, of course. :D You are welcome to share Mel!world with me, of course.

4) SAVE A HORSE, RIDE A FEDCAKE. There is, indeed, not much in the world hotter than Charlie riding Don. Although Charlie riding Billy is something I really should add to my repertoire, don't you think?

5) Hmm...we shall have to discuss this. I find myself going, wait, what? What did I do? All the while I'm grinning like a loon, so THANK YOU.

Yaaaaaaaaaay! Thanks for reading and squeeing. Here's to more Bossy!Charlie in 2010.

[irena_adler]

Love that moment of uncertainty and shame from Don and how Charlie gets past it.

[melissima]

Thanks Irena! It was a tough emotional sequence to iron out: I was convinced Don couldn't just submit without struggle, but Charlie is never going to *take* power from Don. The exchange of power had to be freely given.

I admit the seed of that particular moment came from Emma in beta. Once that fell into place, the whole dynamic solidified.

[byrons_brain]

::grins:: bad boy Charlie, love it!

[melissima]

Thanks! /smishes/