[fic] Inevitability

[melissa_42]

Title: Inevitability
Pairing: 8059
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: 8059smutweek Gravity-It's hard to be strong when I crave you like I do. hc_bingo Stranded/Survival Scenario (very loosely…)
Word Count: ~2,000
Summary: Yamamoto and Gokudera were stuck in Salerno, not that it really mattered.
A/N: Please leave your logic at the door. Don’t ask why they were stranded…

Comments

[yamamotokun80]

so sweet and hot...
and the ending is kinda reassuring for them...

[melissa_42]

Thanks! I have such a hard time writing unhappy endings.

[verito_s]

The end was so happy in a weird way *-*
LOVE IT!

[melissa_42]

I'm glad you liked it! I have a hard time writing unhappy endings. XD

[dicks]

That was freakingly hot. I should've not read this in the office but my willpower’s not that strong too hehehehehhe

Great fic bb. Will re-read this again when I'm not surrounded with idiots :P

[melissa_42]

Lol, it's okay as long as you don't get caught. :P

Thanks! I hope you can enjoy it in peace and quiet!

[moeism]

Let me just say that I really, really liked this. I admit I've been a lurker of your works, but I gotta say that this one is by far my favorite. It's gritty, raw, yet understated and that is a total turnon for me. I loved your characterization for both Yamamoto and Gokudera and the feeling of uncertainty, of being in limbo and not knowing what's gonna happen next totally hit home with me. I've never been a huge fan of second person pov, but you've got me changing my mind after this. xD

You build up each scene with such grace that's really easy to picture and though the sex was hot, it doesn't take over the story so much as enhances it. It's definitely not something in the background, but it adds different emotions, thoughts, a different level to their relationship that completes the story... and I love it when an author can do that.

BASICALLY TL;DR, I really loved this and I can't wait to read more of your works in the future. ♥

[melissa_42]

Thank you for taking the time to make such a detailed comment. It really made my day. ^^

I actually added more to the sex scenes last minute because it didn't seem like enough sex for 8059smutweek. XD I'm glad you mentioned that they didn't dominate the story, since that was a fear of mine after I actually posted it.

Once again, I really appreciate your comment, and I'm glad this fic struck you enough to delurk!

[melissa_42]

Thanks! I have a hard time writing unhappy endings, even for relatively angsty stories.