Comments | melissa_42: [fic] Thunder in your ear

melissa_42

[fic] Thunder in your ear

May 29, 2010 15:14

Title: Thunder in your ear
Pairing: TYL!Lambo/TYL!I-pin
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Word Count: 2,383
Disclaimer: Katekyo Hitman Reborn! belongs to Amano Akira.
Summary: Lambo is tired of no one taking him seriously.
A/N: Written for the fanwork exchange at lamboipin . I’ve never written TYL!Lambo or I-pin before, so I apologize if their ( Read more... )

c: lambo, c: i-pin, p: lambo/i-pin, f: katekyo hitman reborn!, fanfic

Comments 11

z_hard May 29 2010, 14:13:52 UTC

Aaaaaah ILU for this, Meli! I think they're not too OOC and I like the action scene too! 8D I really like how you wrote their interaction, and you make me love TYL!Lambo even more <3

And somehow, when I read that I-Pin called Gokudera to come, I'm sure he'll come with Yamamoto, LOL.

Btw, I'm interested to draw fanart for this fic (because somehow my partner not finished her fic yet and I'm bored, lol). If you allowed me, that is 8D

melissa_42 May 29 2010, 14:33:59 UTC

Thanks! I was kind of worried about the action scene since I'm not used to writing them, but I figured it would be fun with this pair. And writing this made me love TYL!Lambo more, too! ^^

Haha, I was just going to have Gokudera show up, but then I realized they'd need more than one car for all the bodies, so Yamamoto had to tag along. :D

Of course, I'd love for you to draw fanart for this!! Thank you! <3

z_hard December 25 2010, 07:57:58 UTC

Hi, Meli! Well, I know it's SUPER LATE! But I just finished drew a fanart for your fic. Here, if you want to take a look, hehe. Sorry again, dear DX *huuugs*

melissa_42 December 26 2010, 02:55:12 UTC

Eeeeee! That is so adorable!!! Thank you so much! Oh, I love how you draw hands, and the coloring looks like watercolors!

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melissa_42 May 31 2010, 14:53:24 UTC

Thank you! I was really worried about the characterization, so I'm glad I was able to convey the awkward teen vibe.

caramel5555 June 3 2010, 02:54:00 UTC

Dawww, so adorable. I-pin totally wears the pants in this pairing. <3 But Lambo tries so hard, which is awesome because you captured him perfectly! Poor guy. LOL "years of abuse", definitely.

One thing though, TYL!I-pin calls Tsuna "Sawada-san".

melissa_42 June 3 2010, 17:54:56 UTC

Oh yeah, I-pin definitely wears the pants. XD I swear, Lambo is indestructible based on the beatings he takes as a five year old. >__>

Thanks for pointing that out! I'd wondered about that as I was writing this, but I couldn't remember what she called him. I've fixed it now! :D

renuki December 26 2010, 06:13:15 UTC

Well, Lambo, you become really EPIC in ten more years! Maybe even earlier. :D

That was a lovely read! :D

melissa_42 December 30 2010, 02:33:26 UTC

Haha, thank you!

seizansha December 26 2010, 18:22:57 UTC

O_O a fic where Lambo's actually trying to prove himself. i keep seeing TYLLambo like Lampo fics, which doesn't make sense. Lambo's always trying to prove himself and you really got the older one across well.

though i do find it weird for Tsuna to still be coddling him, specially since he was always pulled to the past to fight for the five year old.

melissa_42 December 30 2010, 02:45:51 UTC

Yeah, I think Lambo wants to get recognition, he just doesn't know how to go about getting it without looking like an ass. But he tries, and that's what I love about him. ^^

I know jack about TYL!Lambo and TYL!Tsuna's relationship, but I think Lambo will always be the Vongola baby. ^^ I don't think Tsuna would mean to coddle him, it's just something he's always done.

Thank you for reading and commenting!