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Feb 14, 2007 23:34

Fidelity
Pairing: Gaara/Lee
Summery: Gaara struggles to write a letter his important person
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto

The title from from 'Fidelity' by Regina Spektor. It's a really cute song and it reminds of me Gaara and Lee ♥

Happy Valetine's Day!

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yanksbabe51 February 15 2007, 06:13:41 UTC
That was so cute, i love the ending, It made me feel squishy inside lol.

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melfinalupin February 16 2007, 16:29:51 UTC
Squishy is totally normal! Just ask Gaara ^___^
I'm glad you liked this! *hugs*

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saraste_impi February 15 2007, 11:01:54 UTC
Aww, sweet and fluffy! Perfect. Even the kazekage has problems.. XD

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melfinalupin February 16 2007, 16:29:10 UTC
Yes he does! And no amount of sand can help him! XD
I was going for sweet and fluffy and it seems it got it right! Yay!
Thanks for reading!

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momoiro_usagi February 15 2007, 19:29:28 UTC
That was absolutely adorable!! :3 I love the way you portrayed Gaara...it's so cute to see him acting like a normal teenager! ^_^ And Lee was adorable, too, of course! Nice job!!

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melfinalupin February 16 2007, 16:28:05 UTC
Thanks! ^__^ I can't get enough of Gaara acting normal. It's such a sweet temptation He needs some nomral moments, right? xD
Thanks for reading! ♥♥

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momoiro_usagi February 16 2007, 20:38:23 UTC
^____^ I absolutely adore your icon, by the way! Yay for sandxleaf relationships! ^_____^

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melfinalupin February 16 2007, 22:39:37 UTC
Haha! Thankes xD
It's my OTP

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stariceling February 16 2007, 03:26:39 UTC
I love the idea of Temari and Kankuro trying to help Gaara with his lovelife (or his current lack thereof). They're so funny while still feeling IC.

Lee raising mice in his mailbox and Gaara's warm squishy feelings are just the cutest things ever! >.< Might there eventually be more? Since Gaara seems to have decided he wants to tell Lee in person. *crosses fingers hopefully*

I know you warned, but you should really go through and fix the bits where your spellchecker seems to have substituted in the wrong word. o.0 It's really weird in places.

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melfinalupin February 16 2007, 16:27:13 UTC
Now I'm scared to go through and see all the horibble typos xD
I'm happy to see that you thought Temari and Kankuro were IC because I certainly was not sure. They just did whatever make brain told them to do xD

There might be more later about the part when Lee goes to see Gaara. But I know it was adorable ^__^

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shitbagxsue February 16 2007, 11:32:29 UTC
xD Aww~!
All of your fics are so adorable!!<3
I LOVE you.<3

xD The "baby steps" part made me laugh.
UGH! So cute!!
♥ ♥
Cute Idea~ Nice job!! x) ♥

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melfinalupin February 16 2007, 16:24:36 UTC
*spazzflail*
I'm so glad you liked it!!! ♥ That makes be so happy. What can I say? I'm an adorable person xD Not really ^^
Thanks for much for reading and liking *hugs*

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