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[melagan]

Written for cliche_bingo
Title: Bitten
Cliché: 2nd Person Narration
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: R
Word count: 509
Beta: mischief5
Summary: Rodney POV from the Sensual Magic AU, where John is a vampire and Rodney is not.

Comments

[em_kellesvig]

I really love this series of stories. I hope you continue them for your bingo card. This: He stirs, beckons to you, and you go to his side without hesitation. Oh, my!

[melagan]

Mmmm yes. Without hesitation, kinda says a lot doesn't it :)

I'm just thrilled you enjoyed this despite my fear of comma use.

I have at least one more to do. It's likely to be long though. I'm having great fun using up the squares on the cliche bingo card.

"Tentacles" worries me just a little bit

[em_kellesvig]

You do know that "tentacles" can be interpreted any number of ways. Maybe John saves Rodney from a demented jellyfish... Beach porn ensues.

[melagan]

Well damn. It's good to know I can avoid that part where Rodney's cock is just a little bit different......

[ariadne83]

Mmm lovely.

How do you get those red lines through the squares, though?

[melagan]

Thank you hon. I was trying to write something else in this universe but this came out instead. 2nd person narrative was surprisingly helpful.

Open the picture of your card in paint. Choose your color and click on the diagonal line in the toolbox. That will bring up line width options. Select the line width you like. Click on the corner of the square you want to put a line through and it allows you to pull the line across it like a thread.

[danceswithgary]

Wonderful add and the second person just feels natural in this - terrific!

[melagan]

Considering I've never written 2nd person narrative before in my life, I really, really appreciate the comment.

This cliche bingo is thing is making me do all kinds of things I never would have tried before. *sighofrelief*

[mary_russell11]

mmmhmmm...a wonderful addition to that story*is happy* I do hope you'll write more, this universe you've created has so much potential*glee*

[melagan]

I'm so glad you liked it hon. It's still a work in progress, so yes there's a bit more to come.

potential hee

You know, I think I might need an icon.....

[snowglow1275]

great addition. I love Rodney's POV. Thanks for sharing!

[melagan]

My pleasure! Thank you

[chkc]

<3!

It's a little frightening how much John can make Rodney feel in such a short span of time. But you can already tell that John already trusts Rodney as much as Rodney trusts John.

[melagan]

Yes! Made for each other

*desperately looks at chiche card* Crap, that would have made an excellent theme.