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It's Only A Crime If I Get Caught [s/a]

Oct 14, 2009 17:28

Title: It's Only A Crime If I Get Caught [s/a]
Author: meiloslyther
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Rydon
POV: 1st, Brendon's
Summary: Ryan is sent to the Urie household for behavior adjustment and scares the living crap out of Brendon. That is, until Brendon realizes Ryan's not as bad as he first thought.
Word Count: 11,554
Disclaimer: Not my boys, never happened. ( Read more... )

content!fluff, content!dry humping, rating!nc-17, fic!standalone, content!blowjob, content!first time, content!handjob, content!angst, content!au, bottom!brendon, pairing!rydon

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ms_deathbat October 14 2009, 22:50:37 UTC

i love you! i'll going to read it now!! and not study for my history exam and ill be back to leave a proper comment. :DDD i almost squeled when i saw this on my flist just so you know lol! :D

meiloslyther October 14 2009, 23:11:05 UTC

Heheh. I win.

part 1 of comment ms_deathbat October 18 2009, 04:49:47 UTC

okay here i am, lol. sorry that i havent gotten up your comment yet. the last few days have been like complete fail! and just ugh. but anyways...
first of yes you do win!
and lol that Luke helped you out! haha well kudos to him! :D

the characterizations were dead on with what i had pictured, if not better.
and so now the quote rant begins... xD

It was something I had never felt before, an awkward combination of adrenaline and nausea, my heart pounding as if in fear, my head feeling light and dizzy. you really nailed it with the awkward, confused!bren :)

My father cleared his throat. "Son, you stand up when a lady takes her seat." i love that you even went into details like this! it was an small detail, but oddly important because it did so much to explain the family from the start. xD

"You don't know what I believe, douche nozzle."
*giggles* kudos to stumpylove728 for this word.

A small grin was forming at the corners of his mouth, his eyes crinkling a little. He shifted his hold on me slightly, his thigh pressing a little harder between ( ... )

Re: part 1 of comment meiloslyther October 18 2009, 23:22:10 UTC

It's cool, haha.

Oh, well I'm very experienced when it comes to feeling awkward and confused, so yeah, that part was NO problem, ahaha.

Well, I had to explain the differences between Ryan, Brendon, and Brendon's parents so that there'd be conflict, etc. IDK, w/e, thanks, hahah.

I knew you'd love the wall scene. :D

Oh, I am the master of emotional undertones. *has to shoo away his ego monster*

What's sad about the first kiss part... Luke wrote half of it. HAHAHA.

Innocent!Bren, as you said, is the shit. Seriously. And that letter was HARD AS FUCK to get down, thank you for liking it!

Teehee, the first debauchment scene. I giggled a lot writing that. Does that make me immature? And then the sex. FUCK, that sex scene was probably the most difficult I have ever written just because of all the emotions and characterizations I had to put behind it.

*flails* I <3 you so much right now. Teehee.

Re: part 1 of comment ms_deathbat October 19 2009, 23:10:55 UTC

;D

awww! well yeah you did an excellent job with it, so i guess that helped, lol :)

yeah, i understood that. haha i just liked that custom i guess, interesting. and you did a good job with it!

\o/ win!

and of course you are the master! lol :D

well then, HAHAHAHA! tell Luke that the parts that he wrote were awesome!

YES! \o/ \o/ \o/ and really, wow, lol. i thought you did a really good job with it so you're very welcome!!!

naw, definately not, i don't think i coud have kept a straight face either. *giggles* LOL!
haha well i loved that scene because of that! it was really amazing! im glad it presented such a challenge, then, because the hard work really shows. i loved it so much!

haha *grins* and i <3 you too!
*bakes you cookies and throws you an epic little party, with confetti and everything*

Re: part 1 of comment meiloslyther October 19 2009, 23:23:17 UTC

*eyes go wide and shiny* CONFETTI!

*pounces*

Re: part 1 of comment ms_deathbat October 20 2009, 04:08:17 UTC

*\o/*

<333

part 2 of comment ms_deathbat October 18 2009, 04:51:11 UTC

and then the whole last part made me flail and awww! and just left me speechless... for like a whole 5 minutes after that, lol! i would say more and probably quote every line in this with reasons why i liked it, but yeah that might be a little but weird, lmao! so ill leave it at this cause its already epically long, haha!
i loved this so SO MUCH! i am so glad that i asked you to write this and that you did, because it was seriously wonderful and epic and more than i could have asked for. Thanks bb!!!! you totally made my week and like my life, lol. :D
i hope you had as much fun writing it as i did reading it!
*hugs you tightly* <333

Re: part 2 of comment meiloslyther October 18 2009, 23:24:52 UTC

I had a lot of fun, even through the tough parts, and the times where I needed help, etc. I'm so glad you like it, it was an amazing idea, I must say.

Thank you x 1 million! *hugs*

Re: part 2 of comment ms_deathbat October 19 2009, 23:37:10 UTC

haha well im super happy that you did! and im glad that you wrote it! haha YEAH! i win. *\o/* <- that is me cheering! lol.

thank you x 1 million, as well!
seriously you are like my favorite person ever right now!
*hugs and love*

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