Eternal - Chapter 1

[meheartyunho]

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[museelo]

SPOT

[museelo]

I really can't wait for the angst. It was a preview here and omg I seriously can't wait xD Angst is my food LOL! xD

I really liked this chapter :3 First, because we don't get bored since there are actions and all. Besides, the context is not forgotten, I mean that if sometimes I didn't see the difference between their way of talking, you'll surprise me by the use of some words or expressions and then I'm : "Oh right! xD"

Anyway, if you understood me through my rambling, you're amazing LOL! xD

Thank you for this chapter, the story becomes even more interestinf now that we know the girl is Jaejoong's sister *gasps* O: xD

I'm expecting lots of angst, okay? D8 *ebil glare* xD
Thanks again, see you!

[meheartyunho]

Hahah the angst will be kind of mild in this actually haha xD Sorry to disappoint XD But it won't be boring (hopefully), this one will be more romance than 1095~ since it will focus a lot on their feelings and trying to cope in society :3

Haha awwwwww x183838 <3 Thank you so much :D Haha well it says so in the summary too, and in the prologue.. XD But maybe I wasn't very clear heh ^^;;

Ahhh *hides from glare* I'll tryyyyy D:
Mihi yes, see you <3

[museelo]

Oh okay, well that's still angst :3 So I'll still read :3

I know I know, I was just saying, no need to feel nervous, huh? It was just my opinion ;__;

Anyways, thank you again :3

[lilyshaari_87]

huhu...
yunjae sure know how to hide their forbidden relationship...
i'm looking forward to it..

[meheartyunho]

Haha they do, huh? :D Sneaky bastards haha XD Thank youu ^-^

[jaejoongs_grl]

I feel so bad for Jae :(
Update soon bb!!! I lobe this story :3

[meheartyunho]

ikr D: yunjae are sufferinggggggg T_T
Ahh 2 weeks until the next one, right? ^-^ ;D Thank you :D <3

[haru_ran]

What the- why didn't I get a notification? D'8

[haru_ran]

Ah~ the YunJae-ness~ &hearts

I think I'm prepared for any angst/drama you planned in here~ >8D Thank god I know that they will be together in the end and for eternity~ *phew*

[meheartyunho]

Hihi yes, I love writing them in this :D So loving~
Hahah oh are you? >D mwhaahahah we'll see!
Thank you hun <333

[haru_ran]

Aaah~ reading your story makes me wanna write my own one playing in the older times. *-*

*haha* I'm sure I will cry but at least I know that all will be worth it~ :D

[yunho_ism]

SPOT! :D

[yunho_ism]

poor jae. :(
i wish he could just be happy with yunho. /sobs

can't wait for more.
thanks for the update!

[meheartyunho]

Poor jae indeed :( But let's not forget about Yunnieee D: He really doesn't want this, Jae is the one stopping him from ending it all ><

Thank youu <3

[yunho_ism]

I don't know why but i just don't pity Yunnie in this.
All my sympathy goes to Jae! >.