Eternal- Prologue

Oct 23, 2010 13:22


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myfallenmelody October 23 2010, 11:50:58 UTC
ME!

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myfallenmelody October 23 2010, 11:54:43 UTC
It's only the start, but I'm already wanted more~ Very, very interesting~~~ I enjoyed it. Thank you for the update. ^_~

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meheartyunho October 23 2010, 13:21:20 UTC
Ohh really?? :D Thank youu and it will get better (at least I hope you think so) since I wrote this months and months ago o.o maybe even a year ago O.o

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meheartyunho October 23 2010, 13:20:35 UTC
you!

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yunho_ism October 23 2010, 11:54:16 UTC
Uwaaah. Jonggie!
I love your angst.
I'm definitely tracking this one. :D

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meheartyunho October 23 2010, 13:22:12 UTC
Yess poor little Joongie, eh? D: But Yun is trying~ You'll see, he's head over heels for our JJ ^_~ Weee looking forward to having you around :DD <3

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unknowntibidip October 23 2010, 12:30:54 UTC
I really like this beginning, it sounds really interesting ^^
Can't wait to read more!

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meheartyunho October 23 2010, 13:43:06 UTC
Thank youu ^^ More will come in two weeks, neh? ;) <3

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museelo October 23 2010, 13:03:38 UTC
spot

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meheartyunho October 23 2010, 13:43:17 UTC
yours~

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museelo October 23 2010, 21:23:07 UTC
Idky you say it sucks. Really, it isn't.
I mean your style is good, clear and this is really well written. Even if it was a prologue to you, it looked like a chapter to me :)

Now, this is really original to have the kind of forbidden love in some old times. That's even better, because we don't know where you would lead us haha :) Btw, if it's good or sad ending, I really don't care, I'll be still reading anyways :)

Hm... The fact that Yunho is already married is a good thing. I meant that because I think Jaejoong will feel alone, jealous (?) and all, and I'm sure you'll develop his feelings well :) I trust you :3
Concerning to Yunho, well... I don't know actually... We'll see haha :)

Anyways, this is really thrilling, I really want to read the next update. I'll follow this fic, even thought I was quite reluctant at the beginning because of the time thing ^^'
Thank you for this prologue, I can't wait for your other update :D

Take care, see you :)

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meheartyunho October 25 2010, 19:29:16 UTC
Haha thank you hunn ^^
Haha yes you'll be surprised by everything I throw at you >D Which is good :D

Well he's not married yet :)Yeah there will be a lot of feelings from Jae's side which will develop, just you wait ^_~

Ahhh that makes me happy :DD Thank you for giving it a chance! <3

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r_1353 October 23 2010, 13:09:50 UTC
OH GOODNESS!!!!

YOU'VE UPDATED!!!

WHEEE~~

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meheartyunho October 23 2010, 13:43:52 UTC
Yes I did :D hahah you're so cute ^^ x'D Hope you enjoyed it ^-^

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r_1353 October 29 2010, 13:26:28 UTC
OMG!!!

I'm so sorry for not replying!!!

>.<

my email messed up with me!!! it put all my LJ comment reply in SPAM!!! gaahhhhhh!!!!

So, back to the story.. I'm so glad u updated dear!!~ ^^

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