Battle of the Lightbulb | 10a/11 | NC17

[meh_forget_it]

Title: The Battle of the Lightbulb (or The Perils of Shared Living) | Interlude Three
Author :Meh_Forget_It
Beta: Wolfish_Willow
Fandoms: RPS
Warnings: Slash, m/m sexual relations, strong language,
Rating: NC17
Summary: Jared thought moving in to an apartment just off campus with four other guys in his second year of college was an amazing idea. It’s not long before he

Comments

[twinsarein]

Phew! Hot stuff. That was excellent. I love the idea of Jared giving back Mark's collar, and then Mark handing it to Jensen. A very hot scene from start to finish

[meh_forget_it]

*grins* Glad you liked it!!!

[brunettepet]

Mark passing ownership to Jensen was excellent. Both Jensen and Jared being so new to this dom/sub thing means they can explore it together.

[meh_forget_it]

And they shall be doing a lot of exploring!! Lol! Helps that they have Richard and Mark to go to should they have any questions! Heh!

[confuzed]

Now that was shexy smexy!!! RAWR!! Me likee this chapter alot....

[yvonnegos]

This is an AWESOME story! Beautifully written, and the sex is super hot! Loved it! Buuuuut, if you don't mind a little friendly critique? Totally cool if you just tell me to shove it, but, it might have been just a liiiiittle repetitive. It kinda went, note, freak out, find some place to go, note, freak out, find some place to go, and so on, and so on. *winces* Maybe I'm just being bitchy though. ;P

[meh_forget_it]

Friendly critique is always welcome! *grins* I mean, chances are high I'll ignore it mind, but always welcome!! *snicker* Nah, only joking. On the case of what you brought up... it kinda is because well... that's how it went. This, the whole fic pretty much, is based on events that happened to me. And well... yeah, my friend and I spent our whole second year of uni living in fear of stationery... *snort* And well, not all of them made them run for the hills... *snicker* Plus, it brought them to Jensen, which you know, I always see as a bonus... Soooo wish I had a Jensen to run too... damn. *pouts

[yvonnegos]

Nope, no need to change it, TOTALLY good excuse! That doesn't sound like a fun way to spend college. *cracks up* Amusing definitely though. ;D I hope you know, now that any fics of yours I read, I'm just gonna assume it was a real life experience for you! *giggles and squishes you*

[yvonnegos]

OH! I just thought about it..was the Asylum thing based on something that happened to you to?! O_O *snickers and grins*