Snippet: Jack and Casey 1st Time (NWS)

[megleigh]

I just finished writing the first time between Jack and Casey, and as a special treat/tease, thought I'd post it here. In this scene (which doesn't happen till page 101 of the story, Casey had been preparing to bunk on the sofa in his own apartment, letting Jack take the bed, but some events have taken place that left them both rattled and they've

Comments

[levincolter]

OMG. I got chills reading this! This much emotion in one place makes you an awesome writer, honey! These two are beautiful characters!

[megleigh]

*blush* Thank you.

[leahyu]

Wow! Awesome, Magz! That was so totally hot!

[megleigh]

Thanks! Glad it worked for you.

[addisonalbright]

That was beautiful. I love sweet first time stories and yours was wonderful! :)

[kalitakasar]

Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)

[zathyn_priest]

Very nice, very honest, and very captivating :)