Jerking in the shower?

Mar 12, 2009 11:58

As most of you would know by now, I am in the middle of editing my latest novel, Hunter's Dawn for publication. In a scene towards the end of the book, Jack takes a shower and my editor has suggested that I have an opportunity to up the sensuality of this scene if I wanted to. This made me cringe, because in this year alone, I have read at least a half dozen books which contained the token/obligitaroy jerking in the shower scene. Personally, I am over them, but I am also a writer who aims to please her readers, so I thought I would put this to a poll. Poll Jerking in the shower?

sensuality, reading, jerking off, fantasies, shower scenes, opinions, editing

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