*sniffles* God I love your writing. You just have your finger right on that emotion button. The characterisation and the angst and the enitre thing...just beautiful.
Sometime he would wake up in Eiji’s arms and before he was completely awake, and he was floating in that space of time when you aren’t awake and you aren’t asleep, he cold forget everything and almost begin to make plans for their day that didn’t involve the visiting nurse or shot Eiji had become a master at administering… he could live in that tiny space of time…But reality would always intrude and he would awaken just happy to see the face next to him…
LOVE that description and it makes all my insides mushy...just...really lovely.
...and you're here again and writing and it's been waaaaay too long. Still haven't gotten round to beta-ing your AnK compound fic thingie...been a bit busy, but I will get it done.
Now onto other beta-ing: He looked t the "looked at" Ryoma was tried. "tired" made him say ahhh and last he had gone to a doctor ...slightly confusing, is
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God I love your writing.
You just have your finger right on that emotion button.
The characterisation and the angst and the enitre thing...just beautiful.
Sometime he would wake up in Eiji’s arms and before he was completely awake, and he was floating in that space of time when you aren’t awake and you aren’t asleep, he cold forget everything and almost begin to make plans for their day that didn’t involve the visiting nurse or shot Eiji had become a master at administering… he could live in that tiny space of time…But reality would always intrude and he would awaken just happy to see the face next to him…
LOVE that description and it makes all my insides mushy...just...really lovely.
...and you're here again and writing and it's been waaaaay too long.
Still haven't gotten round to beta-ing your AnK compound fic thingie...been a bit busy, but I will get it done.
Now onto other beta-ing:
He looked t the "looked at"
Ryoma was tried. "tired"
made him say ahhh and last he had gone to a doctor ...slightly confusing, is ( ... )
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