destiny...(8/?)

Jul 16, 2010 05:16

a/n: italics are thoughts as usual and also including lyrics this time :) written in OOC-view, is it right?
this chap is inspired by f(x)’s chocolate love, preferred their electronic pop version compared to SNSD’s retro one. because I am too cool for retro~ ok just kidding! but either ways work well for my fic and it’s highly recommended to listen ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13

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mazokuwithwings July 18 2010, 06:53:57 UTC
omg.. i just noticed this fic, but you have posted it until eight chapters.. how could i didn't know? i'm regretting it.. sigh
i've been wondering.. since i'm an onkey shipper, you know, when i open shinee_replay community, i only check new onkey fics, so i just open the onew/key pairing tag.. when you posted your last chapters, were they not under onkey tag? so i think that's the reason.. or if it's not maybe i'm blind lol

I JUST LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH
I LOVE YOUR PLOT!
and when i was reading this fic, i couldn't help but imagining a harem animanga lmao xD
because on the past, i read and watched too many animanga with harem genre, when a boy being surrounded by beautiful girls who like him a lot and he's all clueless lol
aahh.. i've been wanting to read a fanfic like this, with jinki's the protagonist of course, because i think he matches with that character, and all of the members are trying to make him theirs, and me, being an onkey shipper as i am, want jinki to choose kibum teehee~

and that onkey scene is DAEBAK!! i was listening to chocolate love when i read that and i could portrayed it easily xD
too bad.. jjong interrupted them.. dang! kekeke~
i love jinki's umma.. such a wonderful woman!
jinki's so close with her :D
so close to be an incest relationship also xD hell, i am like, obsessed over incest, only the siblings' love though :P

omo.. you should update soon, i'm in love with this fic~ write more okay? thank you for writing it ♥

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meggayi July 18 2010, 14:51:00 UTC
aww~ don't say that...you're reading now aren't you? i'm glad you found it ^^
ahhh...i get what you mean...as for the tag...because there wasn't any major onkey scenes in the previous chapters, just mild, so i didn't place it in the tag...you're not blind so don't worry :D

gomawo! ♥
love ya for loving it! ^^
ahhh...harem...i didn't read it before, but from what you described, i see why you think jinki fits...he's such a dork to notice things fast enough... xD
lol! i am not sure certain about the ending yet...still weighing the pros & cons...

yes! i was listening to the song and bam! the idea hit me! xD so i wrote this chap...or else...the fic would be stuck at chap 7 instead...jjong's cute, but i am mean to make him interrupt...my poor boy...flaring his nose too much is not helping reduce the size of his nostrils
he only has his umma with him...that's why i made him seen so in love with her...
xDDDDD incest is always fun to read! i love reading incest too! but placing it in real life just makes me shudders x_x

i would! be back on thursday/friday, either day...that's the targeted day i set to update my fic weekly...hopefully...if things doesn't get in my way...
i would! no worries! enjoy writing this alot! ^^
mianhae for the word vomit and ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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