Predictable, Chapter 2

[patches365]

Chapter 2 of my "Roxanne is actually an awesome character and I'll use the movie to prove it essay-turned-fanfic" story is now complete. Now with actual movie references!

Chapter one here

Comments

[demishock]

I continue to love and adore this re-telling of the movie from Roxanne's POV. "That's for not washing the bag" indeed. XD;

I love that she picked out that outfit based entirely on its practicality in the case of a kidnapping. And I love how she only pretends to be knocked out. And how even before Metro Man's fake death comes to pass, there are already a couple of little things (spider, flirting, hurt look) out of the ordinary about that particular kidnapping. Foreshadowing~!

"The Megamind Theory of Utter Failure" -- OUCH. XD; It's so true but... ouch. :( Poor thing; he tries SO HARD.

[hypsidium]

Oh wow this is great stuff. I look forward to seeing more from you!

[drakkhen]

I AM LOVING THIS. I was going to list my favorite parts, but I have a hard time choosing because the entire fic is so great. You've nailed Roxy's personality and wit.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

(And you even fixed a tiny plot hole in the movie--she said that she was thinking about alligators on the way over, when she was really unconscious almost the entire time. In your version, this line actually makes sense!)