By The Pricking of My Thumbs: Chapter 5/5 (Complete)

[fewthistle]

My most sincere thanks to my beta, darandkerry for her patience and attention to detail. Love ya, Tex-Ass!

Chapter One

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

Comments

[green78]

It had taken surviving a soul-scarring nightmare but Myka realized something: in the end, for her, none of that mattered; she loved Helena and that was all she needed to know.

Oh...*wipes away a tear* That's just so resoundingly beautiful.

Helena’s voice dropped to a sinful register. “I’ve always been a firm believer in hands-on demonstrations.”

*blushes and bursts into giggles*

Until all she could remember of her dream was the feel of Helena’s skin against her own, a memory she had every intention of recreating, over and over and over again.Perfect, perfect ending. Oh-so-passionate... *sniffle

[green78]

PPPS: Your usage of metaphors and similes and the ones you use ROCK.

[fewthistle]

I must admit, I am a bit overwhelmed at your kindness. Thank you so much. I cannot tell you how deeply I appreciate the generous words. This has actually been something of a labor of love for me, so for others to find in it something of value is a tremendous gift. I honestly worried that the ending was a bit too sappy, as I am not prone to being all that mushy, so I am pleased that you didn't feel it was over the top *g*.

Thank you again for the ongoing support and encouragement while I was writing this. I am in your debt.

Cheers,

Few

[green78]

You are hardly in my debt - this story is VERY worthy of praise. It's so very captivating and beautiful, and I'll admit, I've read the ending scene a couple of times now. And saying it's a labor of love, well, that explains it - when you put your heart into your work, it's that much better. :)

[mayireadtoday]

Fantastic two paragraphs: "Because if Myka had learned anything about Helena Wells, it was that time and experience had brought with them a caution, a reserve that was nigh on impossible to breach unless the lady herself offered the keys.
[...]
that the good inside Helena far outweighed any faint potential to harm."

Wonderful story. They are so cute -- your H.G. and Myka need to have babies together.

[fewthistle]

LOL. I don't know if I can picture Myka as a parent...they had to start an immediate therapy fund, for children with over-protective parents. *bg*

Thank you for the generous comments. I am truly in your debt for sticking it out through the entire story and for always leaving such kind words of encouragement.

Cheers and take care!

Few

[4ensicbones]

A perfect ending to a brilliant story!

[fewthistle]

You are too kind, my dear! Thank you so much for the lovely compliments!

[fewthistle]

Thank you so much for reading! I truly appreciate the kind words!

[fitful_fire]

this is exactly how the events of the show should have happened.

it was beautiful. thank you so much!

[fewthistle]

Thank you!! I am so very pleased that you enjoyed the ride and that you liked my version of how season two "should" have ended! *g*

Cheers!

Few