Cream and Pearls - f/f fic

[mee_eep]

This is a first attempt at writing femslash, hope it works.

Title - Cream and Pearls
Words - 1131
Plunny - Charis, or rather a link provided by Charis ;)  image

Comments

[indigoraven]

Thumbs up from this quarter!

[mee_eep]

Thanks ^o^

[charisstoma]

It is rare that I can appreciate fem-slash but this did it. Never would I have found myself considering how those beads worn would feel used in fem-frontage. My mind went there.
You did this well.

[mee_eep]

Strangely it was harder to write than m/m, deciding how far to take it...

Glad you think so, thank you.

[charisstoma]

YOu wanted to know the response from the child re: this product as a bridal shower gift.

"Love you Mom. But yes I think I would die. Also I think (name of her fiance) wouldn't just die he would have to reincarnate to die again. :)"

I am hysterically giggling and will have to choose something more appropriate instead. Darn. Maybe the white thigh high stockings to go with the wedding gown, you think? *giggling*

[mee_eep]

Also I think (name of her fiance) wouldn't just die he would have to reincarnate to die again. :)"

LOL I love that answer!

*snciker* you're so wicked *hugs you*

[saskia399]

Mouth dry as Sas read this.

Very poetic and lushious, erotic, very very good!

Like Charis I rarely enjoy femslash, but this was YUM! Well done, just enough shown, just enough not!

[mee_eep]

Thank you so much ^o^

Not something I read often myself, so have no idea how this compares. Wanted to write sensual rather than erotic.

[saskia399]

O_o Sensual, erotic ... *questioning look* there's a difference? @_@ erm *tries to hide own ignorance* *fails* *failsafe grin*

[mee_eep]

Well I read sensual as being all lushous feeling but erotic as more sexual and in danger of turning sleazy.
Probs just how I see the words though, erotic doesn't always equal sleaze but I've been reading some free ebooks so....*sigh*

[theskimblishone]

Thank you for this. There's so little femmeslash in the world that it's always a pleasure to find some, and find some worth reading - so much femmeslash out there is badly written erotica, or written for cis men, so it ends up being something like searching for half a needle in a haystack!

This was very sensual. For my own preferences, I like it to be a little bit more direct (there's this funny double-or-triple-standard when it comes to what is and isn't considered explict when there's het, m/m, or f/f involved) but I also understand why it isn't, and you did do a pretty good job on this. I think the sensuality also matches the focus-piece of the scene - the pearls - and I do like the descriptions of Felicity wearing them and of the pearls themselves. That was very well done. :)

[mee_eep]

Thanks :) I'm glad you think it works.

Too much catholic upbringing of what 'nice' girls don't do, when writing a female characters (f/f or m/f) I start asking myself if she comes accross as forward/hot or lewd/cheap *sigh* society has a lot of double/triple standards.