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[mee_eep]

‘Anything?’

‘No’

Azre stood behind his young lover; massaging his shoulders as he watched the text fly across the screen, Baxter busy combining his computer skills with his Scrying ability.  Baxter increasingly got this way after a visit home.

Sometimes Azre felt Baxter had a dozen fathers beyond the two formidable men that had adopted

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[theskimblishone]

I'm not reading (no time, arugh!) but I am sending you hugs, and crossing my fingers that this time is the one for your laptop!

a US (or possibly alien)

Aussie here, I'd vote alien. :D *mutters apologies to the US contingent under breath*

[mee_eep]

Thanks :) Your vibes kept it going a few days!

I'm writing to the company I bought it from and the manufacturer and threatening them with trading standards, this happened when I first bought it and now twice since, this does not bode well. I want a new laptop!

LOL (sorry US) it's wierd it keeps insisting things are spelt wrong and I'm arguing with it that they're actual words and happy as they are grr. Also apparently my whole text is one long fragmented sentance *sigh* grammer checker I hate you! I can't read for squiggly underlining.

I don't actually remember posting this! I was so exhausted by then and doing anything to keep awake lol. Got to bed at 11 so now feel like I've slept all day; got up, eating, going back to work *sigh* hols next week YAY

[theskimblishone]

Threaten away; my fingers are crossed.

I so hear you. In reverse, though, I keep having to change my dictionary settings whenever I beta-read - otherwise I keep getting perfectly legitmiate words in American English highlighted as errors, and that's just as distracting. Can't you change the dictionary settings, though?

LOL! I really have to applaud you on your writing skills, then. I don't think I could write that well if I was so tired, not at all.

I really like the thought of all the djinn intent on justice. The thought of the two brothers bringing out the best in each other makes me smile, but the extended family going on here really is beautiful. *glomps djinn en masse*

[mee_eep]

Letter drafted. Typing it up with crossed fingers!

LOL trust me I'm impressed this laptop has a working word prog. changing dictionaries would be pushing my luck. It makes distressed bleeps whenever you ask it to do anything.

Djinn on a misson :)

[mee_eep]

There shalt be gore!

[charisstoma]

Oh I love this beginning. Part 1 *BIG SMILE*
Kadir's story, it can be seen, is going to be great and Baxter/Azre together is to live in anticipation of melt down.

GAh.. You wrote this so tired that you don't remember posting it?!? *head desk* Am an amazing shade of teal.

[mee_eep]

*blush* I hopes so, part2 going up now.

wooo pretty colour! *drags Charis to DIY for paint match* ;)

[clodiametelli]

I loved the relationship between Azre and Baxter. There's something very convincing about how the two children relate to each other and how Ceylen acts as intermediary between Kadir and the outside world. Look forward to finding out more.

[mee_eep]

Glad you liked it :)