Fic: What lies beneath (Joe/Nick, NC-17)

[mediaville]

Title: What lies beneath
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Jonas Brothers, real-person slash, underage (Nick is 16) m/m incest. A-again. Also some mild bondage and d/s overtones. Undertones? Tones.
Word Count: 7,100
Summary: A first-time fic with handcuffs as the catalyst?
Disclaimer: This definitely did not happen. And as much as I

Comments

[raindropfloss]

Oh my god. This was perfection. Every bit of it.

[mediaville]

Ahaha, I think it WASN'T. But I just haven't posted in so long, I just needed to finally finish something, so I just vomited up some porn to end it. I think if I had the patience to really write this, I would have had the porn progress over several sessions of Joe surprise cuffing Nick up and jerking him off and maybe sucking him off and Nick being SO PISSED that Joe keeps doing this to him, but also it's kind of working, and he's more relaxed and focused and happier, etc. And then after a FEW sessions, that's when Nick would admit to getting off thinking about fucking Joe. That would have been more believable than the way I wrote it, I think, but I just wanted it DONE.

[raindropfloss]

I understand how you'd want that build-up and everything but I thought it was really sweet this way. It was still hot in that dub-con kind of way, but also sweet because eventually Nick just gave into it because he wanted to. I think this was really good, and I'm kind of glad you wanted it to be done.

(But oh my god, right? Why is writing such a chore these days?)

[backinblack]

AAAAAAAH I WILL TRY FOR COHERENCY HERE.

Okay, so I love the idea of someone (especiaaaallly Joe because of how close they are) wringing Nick's iron-like control from him and just taking over in a D/s kind of way. SO THIS WAS PERFECT. Adding in the handcuffs (which Joe had in a reasonable scenario, because in this fandom it's kind of hard to explain why or how they'd buy sex aids), so much hotness I can't deal.

THANK YOOOU FOR THE MOMENTS OF NIPPLE PLAY. I've been living for that for so long, you have no idea.

I love the progression of what happened with Joe, how it was natural even though it was WEIRD, and how he had to steel himself through some of the dirty-talk, doing it for Nick. <333 He totally would.

I WANT ALL OF THE PORNS BY YOU FOREVER, brb chaining you to your computer and giving you Red Bull. Write forever!!! Write more in this verse, even! Hahaha I'm not obnoxious at all.

[mediaville]

HA. That's the reason this shit was so LONG. Because I knew I wanted to write handcuff porn, but I couldn't figure out how to realistically get them access to handcuffs! Or to even get either one to think about using them that way, even if they had them.

I'm glad you liked it though - I want to write porn all day long, too! BUT NOW IT'S YOUR TURN.

[backinblack]

It was so perfectly done, I wouldn't have known you had to think about it!

PORN ALL OF THE TIIIIME. I want to porn but I don't have a WIP in progress that I can finish shortly. :( Cry for me (and write more porn).

[onlyaminorthrt]

Oh..wow. This was.....I can't even. Currently unable to.

I love your writing...I really do. This was great.

Now, for the sequel were Nick really does fuck Joe until he can't sit for days.....(ohgodIneedit)

[onlyaminorthrt]

where*

[mediaville]

Ha, sure - it only took me a year to write this one. I'm sure I'll whip the sequel out by the time Nick turns 24. :(

[2oclockcheckout]

WHAT. It's a good thing I didn't write any of the porn, because this is waaay better.

"But you don't, do you? You don't get yourself off enough. And when you do, I bet you just do it all quick and businesslike, just to get it over with. I bet you don't do it right." Joe makes a pained face, holds his breath and speeds up his strokes, so he's tugging furious and rough on Nick's cock, like he's angry at it. "I bet you do it like this," he says, voice strained and exaggerated. Nick's stomach convulses like Joe's just punched him, sucking his gut so fast it goes concave.

Ugh, god. That is so hot to me, I don't even know. And I would ask for a sequel where he fucks him, but maybe I should wait until I can actually complete something myself.

[mediaville]

Thanks for helping me talk through it, lady! And idk about the sequel. I still have all the rest of those WIPs to finish, as well as all of the awesome prompts on the prez_porn posts. Ugh, so much to do!

BUT. TAG. YOU'RE IT.

[cwazzle]

Fuuuucccckkk meeeeee.