Oh I like the idea of Nick feeling possessive and jealous in light of Joe's recent social activities a whole bunch. And I think the swearing worked well in the context of the story--not OOC at all. Nice job!
Haha - idk why I'm always writing Joe as such a PROVOKER of Nick, but I like him that way. He knew EXACTLY what he was doing leaving Nick to stew about it alone all night while he was out not-getting-bitten by his buddies. Sneaky little Joe.
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I love your writing style. You write physical movement very well. That probably sounds weird but I'm not really sure how else to put it. :D
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