I'm sorry. I just HAD to.

May 10, 2009 23:46

Friends, people who like my J2 fic, my squee about Biggest Loser and my amusing stories about raw chicken, and most of all balefully - I need to apologize for what I'm about to do.

Title: To me, you are perfect
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Jonas Brothers (yes, that’s a warning), un-betaed, real-person fiction, featuring homosexual underage ( Read more... )

joe/nick, jonas brothers, fic, rps

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smithereen May 11 2009, 05:28:39 UTC
Oh Jesus. This is really fucking good. I mean, it's hot obviously. It's incredibly hot. (The POOL and Nick's BELLY!) But also it made me CRY. I had to go get myself A TISSUE because the aching sweetness of what you did here, of how much they love each other, is just so gorgeous and there's such a palpable affection and warmth. It's just... Really, really good.

Also, I just- Really love this paragraph so, so much. What a gorgeous image.

But then Nick turns to him, nudges Joe’s face to the side with his own, and sings unfamiliar words softly in Joe’s ear. It must be a new song Nick’s working on, and Joe can picture the words floating through the air, about sunshine and love, and knows immediately which parts Nick will want him to sing when they record it.

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mediaville May 11 2009, 11:34:04 UTC
Right? What is it about this boys? I swear I bet that DOES HAPPEN, with Nick singing to Joe and Joe just tapping out the beat on Nick's leg.

I sort of HATE THEM because I LOVE THEM SO MUCH. :-(

That said, I'm really glad you liked the fic!

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I'll just be over THERE, kthx oh_mcgee May 11 2009, 05:54:36 UTC
“Did you write that song for me?”

A few beats pass, and then Nick says, “Yes.”

Joe huffs out a laugh, warm breath blowing against Nick’s neck. “You don’t even know which song I’m talking about,” he says, smiling.

“Doesn’t matter,” Nick says. He covers Joe’s hand on his stomach and tangles their fingers together.

THIS IS. THIS WAS. Well obviously it was the Hottest Fucking Thing I've Ever Read Ever, but THIS? You just like,totally and epicly summed up JoeandNick, dude. DOESN'T MATTER. YES, THIS. OMFG I think I love you.

ps: was rec'd by novaberry in case you're like, who the heck are you?! lol

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Re: I'll just be over THERE, kthx mediaville May 11 2009, 11:36:29 UTC
AHAHA. I'm not wondering who the heck you are! YOU'RE A PERSON WHO READ MY UNDERAGE DISNEY RPS INCEST AND LIKED IT.

Which, seriously? THANK YOU FOR EXISTING. :-)

And for commenting, of course! I'm glad you liked the fic! I was worried that last part was too schmoopy, but these boys! OMG THE LOVE.

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Re: I'll just be over THERE, kthx oh_mcgee May 11 2009, 15:39:40 UTC
OOPS, I probably just read this again. One more thing I wanted to say was, I ADORE how you have the whole boys-being-boys/brothers thing DOWN. With the wrestling and the banter and the closeness (haha ok, so maybe that's not boys being boys or brothers) but I just love that SO much, its what totally makes this for me. In conclusion, YAY. \o/

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ginevracullen May 11 2009, 06:04:25 UTC
i thought that was amazingly lovely.

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mediaville May 11 2009, 11:37:30 UTC
Thank you! :-)

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mediaville May 11 2009, 11:39:02 UTC
\o/ So glad you liked it!

no one notices because that is just how they are

YES. THIS.

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mediaville May 11 2009, 11:43:20 UTC
OH NICK. I had read somewhere some time that Nick had sent some girl a text message that was all, "Your mouth makes me melt," and ever since then I've just imagined Nick to be guy who really just needs to say what he's thinking without being embarrassed at all. Once Joe has made the first move, obv.

And then during this scene, in the pool, I think it's important for Nick to let Joe know that it wasn't just about getting off. That he wants to be BOYFRIENDS with Joe. He needs to be clear about it.

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novaberry May 11 2009, 13:21:26 UTC
And then during this scene, in the pool, I think it's important for Nick to let Joe know that it wasn't just about getting off. That he wants to be BOYFRIENDS with Joe. He needs to be clear about it.

YES. This is SO NICK, I think! You REALLY nailed him! And JOOOOEEE! With his little daydream-wonderings of looking like a NORMAL person! UGH. BRILLIANT. YOU ARE REALLY GOOD AT THIS, OKAY??

(sorry, I'm kind of skulking around this post to make sure people APPRECIATE your GENIUS.)

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mediaville May 11 2009, 14:26:34 UTC
AHAHA. You are like my JoBros BODYGUARD. ILU.

And it's so nice that you think I've NAILED Nick here, because, man, there's nothing I'd like more. UM. ER. YES.

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