The Old Ball and Chain (4/4)

[mech_bull]

Comments

[pghbekka]

EEEEEE!

Oh, happy sigh!

I loved this. The whole thing!

I was a bit apprehensive about the time changes, but found that you did them well enough that I was never confused about when and where and what happened last, even when they changed.

Loved the dance between the two throughout the fic, and the uncertainty.

My favorite part, because it can't be said enough
Luke didn’t really know what had come over him. This was so not like him, at all. He wasn’t the kind of guy to just jump someone else and -

Except, yeah, he realized. He kind of was. Because he loved this. [...] And, Luke remembered as he leaned forward to suck Reid’s lower lip back into his mouth, as he reached his hands around to begin to unbutton Reid’s shirt, he hadn’t wanted to wait with Noah. He wasn’t the kind of guy who didn’t need this in a relationship.

In conclusion: YAY!

[mech_bull]

Yep, these time changes were nowhere near as complicated as they could have been! Glad you were able to follow!

Thanks so much!

[sleeper6]

Really enjoyed this little series. :)

[mech_bull]

Thanks!

[nancygrew]

I really enjoyed this story. I was glad that Luke took his time after breaking up with Noah to really think about whether he and Reid was right instead of rebounding quickly. Don't want any regrets for the guy. Thank you for writing it and posting.

[mech_bull]

Definitely needed to make sure he was doing things for the right reasons! Thanks!

[oh_amelia]

I wanted to wait until you posted all the parts before I started reading this.

I find it hilarious to picture Reid being all chummy with Lily and having to act like a couple.

And I'm glad that Lily got to see what a kind caring person Reid really is and realizes how good he is for Luke.

[mech_bull]

Hee. Oh Reid/Lily! Don't know who had the harder job acting there, really...

[cindergal]

He had the feeling he was about to have everything he always wanted.

Yes you are, Luke! ♥♥♥

Great story! I loved it.

[mech_bull]

Thanks!