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mech_bull

Fabrication (2/27)

Jul 26, 2010 18:48

( Chapter Two )

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slayerkitty July 27 2010, 01:28:27 UTC

Ok, so I didn't get a chance to comment on chapter one, but I must tell you I did a dance of joy when I saw it this morning. And now chapter two? OMG. I've squee'd so much today, and this was just icing on the cake. LOVE. :)

mech_bull July 27 2010, 17:55:40 UTC

I'm glad I could add to the joy of this day!

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mech_bull July 27 2010, 17:56:41 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, I kept trying to make that line more complicated or something, and finally I was just "screw it. That's all we need to know!"

turtleisland July 27 2010, 01:37:53 UTC

I'm always so happy when you post a new chapter, but you're killing me with where you end it!

Reid stopped breathing. Unlike everything else in this town, the person in front of him had changed.

Luke Snyder was now a man.

LOVE THIS!

mech_bull July 27 2010, 17:57:19 UTC

Finding the perfect ending spot for a chapter is so much fun!

stl29tide July 27 2010, 01:41:35 UTC

Ah, I'm thinking Reid doesn't like Noah leaning back into Luke's personal space! Lol. Can't wait until he finds out that Luke isn't Noah's boyfriend. And I can't wait until we get some sexy time since Luke's a man now. Thanks for the new chapter! <3

mech_bull July 27 2010, 17:57:49 UTC

I'm thinking he doesn't like it one bit!

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mech_bull July 27 2010, 17:59:14 UTC

Yes, we do! Thanks for reading!