Happily Ever After

Jan 01, 2013 02:50

Title: Happily Ever After ( Read more... )

nc-17, heroes, general masterlist, fic, gabriel, stand alones, heroes_contest, peter

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game_byrd January 1 2013, 17:06:30 UTC
Wow. That does *not* disappoint! Definitely bunk material. Gabriel might not be empathetic, but he sure is HOT. You do a wonderful job of showing what he sees as hot in Peter. Peter really seems all kinds of awesome here, "amazing", and so super-desirable. :D

Somehow, I don't think this sort of 'punishment' is going to cut down on Gabriel's naughty behavior.

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means2bhuman January 3 2013, 03:50:45 UTC
Ooh, bunk material. That's so awesome! I tried to use the subtle-bat and not list the obvious positive characteristics of Peter's - I tried to pick different ones so I'm glad that the feeling came across.

Yes, a real burden to bear, that punishment is ;)

Thank you for the comment.

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dancingdragon3 January 8 2013, 03:52:35 UTC
Oh that was super hot! I love wanting it rough and dirty Sylar! Woot!

Also like the little detail of Peter loving PDA and how easy it is to turn him on with only a few subtle teases. Very nice. Also nice was how Sylar described Peter's bulging muscles, heh heh.

I appreciated Sylar's honest feelings about the elderly woman's possible death. That he doesn't want the daughter or Peter to feel bad about it. That's more empathic than he thinks it is.

Back to the sex - Peter demanding to be blown was over the top out of this world hot! The image is burned into my brain.

Way to go!

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means2bhuman January 10 2013, 01:16:48 UTC
Yay! Super hot!

Every time GB mentions her Peter's kink for exhibitionism (and it is her character concept that I borrowed here), I think of Peter being a stripper because he'd probably actually like it! Think of the moves he'd bring home to his shy watchmaker... hmm... ;)

I'm sure Gabriel making an effort does it for Peter, too, stepping outside his comfort zone.

Yes, Gabriel's view: Death? What a hassle. Avoid if possible.

I'm of the opinion that Peter would get bossy if he knew how much it turned Sylar/Gabriel on. Let it burn into your brain!

I have not forgotten your wonderful series - you really outdid yourself. I have to be in the commenting mood and I hope to do it this weekend! They were such awesome reads and they kept me up late past my bedtime. Bake yourself a cake, too; you worked hard.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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amles80 January 8 2013, 21:43:42 UTC
Seeing Peter working hard, being happy, doing good was a surprising aphrodisiac

How wonderful is that?! So wonderful! I really like how Gabriel sees Peter here, what they mean to each other, the love between them. And I like that your "Endings" story has a happy ending. <3

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means2bhuman January 10 2013, 01:19:14 UTC
Isn't it wonderful? :D

I think Peter's a walking osmosis machine. He's in a good mood, so are other people. He's doing good, he inspires (or arouses). Peter's pretty hunky, so him doing his talented, hero, guy thing would/should turn most people on if you ask me. He rubs off on other people.

Yay, happy ending!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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lornrocks April 22 2013, 10:10:34 UTC
Um, wow. This was...wow. Words fail. But this was fantastic.

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weird_little June 16 2014, 08:46:53 UTC
Well, THAT was yummy! :-) Thanks for sharing it with us.

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means2bhuman June 17 2014, 21:03:05 UTC
You're very welcome. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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