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means2bhuman

Just Talking (Part II)

Mar 14, 2012 19:54

Title: Just Talking (Part II)
Characters: Sylar/Gabriel Gray, Peter Petrelli
Rating: PG-13/NC-17
Warnings: Discussions of abortion, death of pregnant women, bad living conditions for children/infants including scientific testing. Discussions of semi-graphic casual sex/sex practices, contraceptives. It's a bit dark and depressing but it ends nicely. ( Read more... )

nc-17, mbu-inspired, heroes, fic, sylar, non-canon, pg-13, peter

Comments 35

game_byrd March 15 2012, 03:18:16 UTC

That ending still has me grinning! I love how the guys are jockeying with each other, sort of verbally and emotionally sparring, pushing and pulling on each other. They're getting friendly, with an undertone of 'more than friendly' going on that they're both aware of. :D

"That’s how it’s supposed to be; that’s how it’s intended.”
I like this line a lot. I hadn't thought about it, but I agree that's what Peter would think. He'd have ideas that people were meant to love each other, that there was a divine purpose to the world. The sex act would fall into that just like everything else - that there was a meaning to that act that made it sacred, in a way. Not that he'd be all hung up about its holiness, but to Peter it would be something special and to be honored even if he's getting it on with Chelsea in the back of the bar. Because that made him and Chelsea happy, which means it's a good thing, it has virtue, it's cool, it's valuable, it's right.

I hadn't thought about Sylar's opinion on kids, but I agree. I especially liked this: he’ ( ... )

means2bhuman March 16 2012, 01:44:52 UTC

I know! I really debated if Peter being a bit...inviting was too much, but I just placed it later in their Wall-stay and it worked ( ... )

lornrocks March 15 2012, 20:03:12 UTC

Haha, these boys are crazy. Here's hoping they stop circling around and around each other.

means2bhuman March 16 2012, 01:48:27 UTC

Aren't they just? We do love throwing them random curveballs to navigate.

I second that; they'll get there eventually. Destiny's worth the journey or something like that.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

dancingdragon3 March 16 2012, 02:21:31 UTC

Great conversation! I was reading it eagerly and loved every bit ( ... )

means2bhuman March 16 2012, 03:17:46 UTC

Woo hoo! Thanks so much ( ... )

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