Where to start? (2b/?)

Mar 17, 2009 21:17


 part 2a:
http://mean-manic.livejournal.com/2328.html

Where to start? (2b/?)

When it was almost 7pm Erica was parking her car near the restaurant that she was supposed to meet Laura.

A waiter showed her to the table that Laura had reserved earlier.

“Hey! Sorry I’m late!” Laura said a few minutes later.

“It’s ok. I just arrived.” Erica smiled.

“So, the ( Read more... )

erica hahn, where to start

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novak_benson March 17 2009, 21:18:31 UTC
I'm really liking this so far. I can't wait for more! Great writing. :D

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mean_manic March 18 2009, 08:59:34 UTC
I am really glad you like it! :D
thanks!

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hot_4_hahn March 18 2009, 03:36:57 UTC
hmmm...very interesting. I wonder what made Erica pull back...

Ooh, Erica Hahn stringing women along, I love it!

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mean_manic March 18 2009, 09:01:21 UTC
you will see!
It's not so hard to figure it out! :D I think...but maybe it's just my twisted mind!
Thanks for reading!

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mickaela82 March 18 2009, 10:16:39 UTC
WOW, Erica's house is AMAZING!

I wonder how will Julie react when she finds out that Erica and Lauren are an item. Kinda, sorta. :D

“Nothing… I just… I’m sorry. I think you should go.”

You've GOT to be kidding me!

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mean_manic March 18 2009, 10:25:23 UTC
who said they are an item? You will see it's gonna be interesting conversation! :D hahahaha

Why kidding?
I think it's good that she didn't force herself to do anything what could make her regret it later. It's not Erica who's jumping with stupid grin just like that. She have to proces some things in her head (remember dr Whyatt?) but it's not about that.

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damn me coniac March 18 2009, 12:28:27 UTC
yeah ur right it's kinda tooooo long chapter...but overall its good not boring to read..what can i say...nothing?..bwahaha..ok seriously..julia and erica, they are both mean (like you).. Both of them are tough women and they have same characteristic/traits, one of the reason why they always tend to be on the wrong footing of each other, beside that Julia think that Erica has a thing with Kevin.. Laura, she’s aggressive one.. won’t give up easily.. ok..i will not ask why Erica stop herself for kissing Laura..just update soon so we will know the answer..

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Re: damn me mean_manic March 23 2009, 22:33:40 UTC
well I almost finished 3rd chapter. Erica (maybe) will say why she stopped herself that night! :D

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